|Reviews for Disharmony: Notes and Scars|
| STARSONGPAPA chapter 11 . 5/22
I am loving this fic. I wait in anticipation for the next chapter.
| Holia chapter 11 . 5/16
I'd just like to say that I really enjoy this story and I'm glad that I've had a reason to reread it with this chapter. Really curious as to how the gang will react to what Kisuke and Unohana have in mind.
I've also noticed that whilst the start of the story has an almost down tone, and still does whenever Ishin or the gang's the focus of the scene, it almost seems humorous with the various members of soul society creating a fictional crime organisation. We've also seen very little of Yuzu and Karin, though I suppose there's a lot of grounds to cover if you were going to mention everyone that's concerned about Ichigo and/or his friends, like the vizards.
| Darksknight chapter 11 . 5/3
haven't logged into ff.n in FOREVER, but I had to read this story start to (not quite) finish again. I'm super excited for the next chapter! I've been loving the slowly winding up of the plot so far, and all the little easter eggs, so to speak. Thanks for continuing this even after things have been so busy for you!
| Laesk chapter 11 . 4/24
wonderful chapter. thank you for sharing it. not liking the cliffhanger your right. i look forwards to reading more when you update. many thanks
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/23
Love the build up. You've set the stage for a truly magnificent confrontation.
| Mondtanz chapter 11 . 4/20
Nice story. This is the first one I've read that deals with the serious side of things after the Winter War.
Getting the teachersespecially Ochi-santo notice and worry was to be expected, considering she cares a lot about her pupils.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Letting the first Kenpachi out to play was a stroke of genius.
Keep up the good work!
| Xuan Tian Shang Ti chapter 11 . 4/19
Finiiiiii~~, you can’t just post a chapter after so long and then leave it on a cliffhanger! I nearly got run over by a car reading this. Usual stuff love the work love to see where this is going can’t really think of anything to say right now sorry ~~. Good luck with moving back to the states hope you enjoy Japan. When getting a bed maybe won’t be able to bring yourself on a ceiling fan this time. :) Always great reading at your fix looking forward to the next chapter so much
| jcampbellohten chapter 11 . 4/17
Good to see an update. Nothing noteworthy happened to comment on, though I guess I can say he character interactions were well done? I'm looking forward to more.
P.S. It's Arisawa, not Arizawa.
| Mel72000 chapter 11 . 4/16
nobody has thought to give them their plan about the shinigamis ? thank you very much for this chapter.
| ElReyCiervo chapter 11 . 4/15
Oh wow, I'm so glad to see this updated! I love this story so much!
I am very eager to find out what the Quartet's gonna do in the next chapter. I mean, this chapter left off with a serious cliffhanger, so I can only imagine what's gonna happen. Now for the group of "people that had kept them away for so long", is that more so the Captains or the Lieutenants and other Seats?
Anyway, glad to hear that you are doing well, and totally take your time with the updates! Real life stuff definitely comes first. Thanks for the great chapter! :D
| Beloved Daughter chapter 11 . 4/15
I'm just really glad to hear from you again! Loved the chapter update! Yeah, I can only imagine how stressful that would have been for an average citizen...
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/15
I always enjoy this fic! I feel like the quartet are get into like a shouting match or a mock fight against some of the shinigami
| SlashingMoon chapter 11 . 4/15
really thanks for the updateit's awesome
| Elemental-master0506 chapter 11 . 4/15
Love the update even though its so short.
| Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 11 . 4/15
Brilliant as always!
and then they see them kicking ass easily and metaphorically..
dodging attacks from behind without turning around, backflipping, doing all sorts of crazy moves...