|Reviews for Highlander Swordsplay|
| lauree2220 chapter 1 . 11/8/2002
Really enjoyed this. I could follow the scene style easily. Would love to see more of Ethan.
| King Henry the V chapter 1 . 10/14/2002
Just some constructive criticism to the author ...
Make sure you're using the right word. A few mistakes caught the eye. "Nieve" instead of "naive" is just one of several.
There seemed to be a lack of the "Buzz."
A screenplay format makes the story more difficult to follow.
One more thing; the combat was written with too much detail. To improve realism, research is a must.