Reviews for Star Wars Altered Universe: Episode III
ibry000 chapter 21 . 6/14
That was great, possibly better than the first one. Yoda was great in this, and I'm glad that you actually went through with The Purge in this fic, as to not make it yet another story where Anakin doesn't fall completely and stops it from happening. For a while I was worried that you weren't going to develop Shadra any further, but I'm ecstatic that you did, because for some reason I became attached to her after Obi-Wan and Anakin rescued her. I'm also happy about what you did with Vader, making him a clone rather than replacing him with just some generic villain, or just not having him at all. That provided some good conflict for Anakin. Speaking of which, his and Padmé's romance was a treat to read. Oh, and, last but not least, I'm surprised that you actually used Bail in a meaningful way. He's such an underappreciated character, I'm happy he got some attention.

I look forward to reading the next entry in the series.
Haley Renee chapter 21 . 11/5/2017
I've been (re)reading this all week. It's just as excellent as the first time it was posted on here!
TheWateringWizard chapter 21 . 11/5/2017
Oh man, Threepio really cracked me up ! That was once again an amazing story ! Thank you
TheWateringWizard chapter 19 . 11/5/2017
Man I love Artoo! He’s so funny
TheWateringWizard chapter 15 . 5/14/2017
Ohhh what a great chapter! Luke and Leia are finally here! And they're born in Leia's future husband's future ship! God that statement was amazing to write down!
TheWateringWizard chapter 14 . 5/14/2017
Padme why...
TheWateringWizard chapter 13 . 5/14/2017
HAHAHA you killed it! The Millennium Falcon... I wasn't expecting that but I love the surprise!
TheWateringWizard chapter 12 . 5/14/2017
Yeahhhh! They've got yoda, the book, the younglings and a pretty important part of the archives! And they destroyed the rest in front of Sidious!
TheWateringWizard chapter 11 . 5/13/2017
Haha this is the Padme we know! Ressourceful as hell! I hope that Vader won't pick out Padme's location like this...
TheWateringWizard chapter 10 . 5/13/2017
That was a heart-warming discussion between Sola and Padme!
TheWateringWizard chapter 9 . 5/13/2017
Ahhh thank you Bail! Out of everyone in the Senate, you're the only one who realises that the guards of the Empe... Chancellor, sorry, couldn't have defeated even so few as ONE Jedi. So how on earth could they defeat 5 Masters?
TheWateringWizard chapter 8 . 5/13/2017
Well fuck...

I'm gonna rant on General Grievious again. Why the fuck does everyone attack him with lightsabers?! Why can't anyone think for a second and use the Force. The general is nearly 100% droid, he can't possibly use the Force. So use it! Use a force push to get him away and give yourself some time to think. Obi-Wan even did it once, when one of lightsabers blew up, why not do it again? How could he counter you? It just seems utterly stupid to fight against a four-armed, four lightsabers-wielding cyborg! I'm annoyed at Obi-Wan and the Jedis who died before him.
TheWateringWizard chapter 7 . 5/13/2017
Okay so I imagine the conflict going the same way it did before, and Vader comes in, kills Mace and then direction Malastar to finish off the Separatist. Now does Padme fit in that horrible equation? I certainly hope not
TheWateringWizard chapter 6 . 5/13/2017
God this isn't some simple nightmare... Fuckeddy fuck. But how could Vader find Padme on Naboo, I mean how could he know where to go search (if he does)? But if he does and that the last stand will take place on Mustafar, I hope to see Vader spit roasted...

I just hope Padme will be ok.
TheWateringWizard chapter 4 . 5/13/2017
Now you just have to talk about the dark Jedi who killed Dooku. Please please please Anakin don't dismiss it, even if you think it's impossible. If I understood properly, he actually saw his face?
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