Reviews for Defiance
ARSLOTHES chapter 9 . 8/13
looking forward to the next chapter
FORSAKEN KYO chapter 9 . 7/30
Good chapter, I look forward to reading more in the future.
Mind Power.Ki chapter 9 . 7/24
Great job, update soon
falciatore1669 chapter 9 . 7/13
I'm waiting for another chapter. I'm desperate to read another one
Kyranol1 chapter 9 . 7/13
Awesome, this fic is simply awesome.
Thank you so much for writing this.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/5
Nice :) Looking forward to another update
AJGuardian chapter 9 . 7/6
Fuck it's good to see you again.

Thanks for updating and editing your stuff. I went and read ch.7 and 8 again.

Hope to see more from you soon.
ahsanrox chapter 9 . 7/6
nice... have been waiting for this to update,
one of my favourite stories
Shigure Toshiro chapter 9 . 7/5
Good chapter, looking forward to the next one.
SPark681 chapter 9 . 7/5
Nice story so far wonder what things will change with Naruto being in the past and how he'll effect people around him anyways keep up the great work!
Misfit.Inc chapter 9 . 7/5
Yes! You finally updated!
Btw, the earlier chapters, there aren't any line breaks, so when you switch scenes, it gets pretty disconcerting. If you could fix that, then it'd be great.
KonohasBlackReaper chapter 9 . 7/5
Nice to see an update.
I re-read the story from the beginning to read all the new chapters and I hope you don't mind some criticism but frankly, they seemed like a rush job.
A lot of mistakes and confusing to read because of the sudden change of scenes with no demarcation. I suggest using either line break [available in the doc manager of ] or use asterisks or something.
Also, most of the earlier chapters really need re work. Don't rush them. Take your time to build the story.
Looking forward to the next installment
pitbull4567 chapter 9 . 7/5
good chapter cant wait for more
pitbull4567 chapter 8 . 7/4
good chapter
pitbull4567 chapter 7 . 7/4
interesting chapter
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