|Reviews for Defiance|
| ARSLOTHES chapter 9 . 8/13
looking forward to the next chapter
| FORSAKEN KYO chapter 9 . 7/30
Good chapter, I look forward to reading more in the future.
| Mind Power.Ki chapter 9 . 7/24
Great job, update soon
| falciatore1669 chapter 9 . 7/13
I'm waiting for another chapter. I'm desperate to read another one
| Kyranol1 chapter 9 . 7/13
Awesome, this fic is simply awesome.
Thank you so much for writing this.
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/5
Nice :) Looking forward to another update
| AJGuardian chapter 9 . 7/6
Fuck it's good to see you again.
Thanks for updating and editing your stuff. I went and read ch.7 and 8 again.
Hope to see more from you soon.
| ahsanrox chapter 9 . 7/6
nice... have been waiting for this to update,
one of my favourite stories
| Shigure Toshiro chapter 9 . 7/5
Good chapter, looking forward to the next one.
| SPark681 chapter 9 . 7/5
Nice story so far wonder what things will change with Naruto being in the past and how he'll effect people around him anyways keep up the great work!
| Misfit.Inc chapter 9 . 7/5
Yes! You finally updated!
Btw, the earlier chapters, there aren't any line breaks, so when you switch scenes, it gets pretty disconcerting. If you could fix that, then it'd be great.
| KonohasBlackReaper chapter 9 . 7/5
Nice to see an update.
I re-read the story from the beginning to read all the new chapters and I hope you don't mind some criticism but frankly, they seemed like a rush job.
A lot of mistakes and confusing to read because of the sudden change of scenes with no demarcation. I suggest using either line break [available in the doc manager of ] or use asterisks or something.
Also, most of the earlier chapters really need re work. Don't rush them. Take your time to build the story.
Looking forward to the next installment
| pitbull4567 chapter 9 . 7/5
good chapter cant wait for more
| pitbull4567 chapter 8 . 7/4
| pitbull4567 chapter 7 . 7/4