Reviews for Of Weddings and Consumation
Dulce129 chapter 1 . 5/31
excellent.
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 2/9
And, Rapunzel? Next time it won't hurt. Next time will be even better ... and it will continue to GET better, as you learn each other's bodies and secrets and preferences. It will blow your mind. His, too, probably.
She11y chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Oh my god. That's all I can say.
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
Elle chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Wowza. That was a good one. And props for "tangled together" xD
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
This is. Just. SO PERFECT
KittyandSteve17 chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Enjoyable, but if you would like some advice... try to be a little more succinct. Nice job!
anonymous chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Great story perfect balance between foreplay and the real stuff and nicely descriptive as well really enjoyed it!
silviatangled chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
sweet beautiful! !
YanaChanAnimeAndGreek22 chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Wow... I'm totally speechless with this... It's soo detailed. :OOO KEEP IT UP! I LIKE IT!
BYE _
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
Wow! This is the classiest smut I've ever read, and I've read a LOT of smut.
Anon chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
This was just lovely. ;D
WritingVikingQueen chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Nicely done, sexy without being tasteless. Classy indeed! :) I like how she was for the most part unafraid and relaxed, it showed how much she trusted him. And I like what you did at the end, 'tangled together'. Yes, I caught that. ;) Loved it!
disneylove89 chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
This was really lovely! I love the emotion, the tenderness of it all. Well done!