LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! Well written and wonderful lemony goodness!

Ahhhhhh omg this was so fucking INTENSE m. Hands down the best lemon, i got a bit hot and bothered just reading it. Cant wait to read this again soon ️️️

I just have to say that this is the hands-down one of my favorite fanfics of all time. The way that this is written is amazing! It feels so real, so vivid. I don't have any words describe it. You definitely have a gift with words.

*inhuman squealing noises*
This fic is too many shades of brilliant that I think it may have blinded me. I also love how you made the actual sex kind of awkward like it should be for a first time, because although I like steamy hot I-know-exactly-what-I'm-doing-sex as much as the next person, awkward sex is extremely adorable.

I really don't think that it can get more perfect than this.

Gahhhh I finally got around to reviewing this and it was sooooo much better than I anticipated! You write such great lemons.

I loved this it was so sweet and adorable and I know they make it home safe but DAMN THEY BETTER MAKE IT HOME SAFe

I have reread this probably fifteen times since you posted it and it still makes me grin like a fool. I love that you managed to capture the awkward fumbly nature of first-time sex while still making it really hot and sweet.

HOLY crap that was so Fucking adorable I ALMOST CRIED FROM THE FLUFFINESS ERMAHGERD

Wow, this story was very well written. And it was so sexy that I had to stop several times just in order to finish reading it. Good job.

Great! Clap clap!

It's so hot in here!

Sweet, fluffy and those endearing sappy romance!

What a nice birthday gift fic!

AHA oh Maka, it's Soul, how could his kisses be anything BUT drooly? But really, this was just lovely. I loved the scene where they go back into her room and she notices how sinister the moon looks. It was a fantastic image and just blew me away. And then the smut was just awesome; this was some of the sexiest smut I've ever read! Their banter was perfect, their emotions were perfectly captured, and they were a great mix of sexy and awkward. Thanks so much for sharing this! I know I'll be rereading it a lot. :)

This was fabulous! Great description and intimacy without making it awkward. In character, too. Keep it up! :D

I'm crying.