|Reviews for The Metronome|
| The destroyer of fate chapter 7 . 4/2/2016
Dam good story, heres hoping for more
| Me chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
Nice start. Look forward to more.
| god of all chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| varee chapter 7 . 7/11/2014
I'd love to see another chapter of this story.
How did I miss such gem anyway?
| Celis chapter 7 . 4/21/2014
An enjoyable story, no doubt! Hope you keep updating :D
| Taeniaea chapter 7 . 3/18/2014
| meeresstern1983 chapter 7 . 3/17/2014
I just wanted to tell you I like this story a lot. It is rare that Ranma is portraied as anything else than a senshi if there is a Ranma/Sailor Moon Crossover. This here is a nice change from the norm.
And after thinking a little bit, I finally came to the conclusion who Ranma reminded me of with his womanizing ways in your story. He reminds me of archangel Raphael from the manga series Angel Sanctuary. That guy also had a very traumatizing experience similar to Ranma's case in some aspects. And as a response he started to hate women and took his revenge via taking womanizing to a whole new level. Not necessarily how you would expect an angel to act, but in Angel Sancturary there is no clear cut black and white. And what kind of women had a real chance with the bitter archangel of wind in that story? The ones who called him out on his behaviour and were open and honest to him. And true and loyal to themselves and the ones they loved. But as we're talking about a Ranma/Sailor Moon Crossover that has nothing to do with Angel Sanctuary, I will stop here.
Still, I wonder if Ranma really likes womizing as much as he claims or if he, deep down inside, just wants to take his revenge for the abuse he suffered at the hands of Akane and his other crazy so-called financées by using other women and playing with them. If that is the case, than he and Rei will have their work cut out for them if they ever want to move on from the past. And I think I will look forward to this. And of course the rest of your story which I like very much so far. I also hope that you don't mind my little excursion into Angel Sanctuary territory too much.
| Meech Macko chapter 7 . 3/10/2014
Was a bit confusing at times but still going good...Ranma seems to be Jadeite from past life and being a past Regal General class ...hoping he has some weapons with him; instead of his forever done fists only...a General would fit more with a sword equipped and in Ranma's case...a Chinese jian or a Katana...hell maybe even a european style longsword ( obviously a sword has more advantage than fists with its sharp edge and long reach) and with his great martial arts dextirity and grace, swordplay will be a cinch for him...
Hoping Ranma comes off his playboy stage...
I wonder how Akane betrayed him? My assumtion is that she went with Ryoga.
So IF he hated women whats his thing about playboying around with women if he hates them...some motive?
| Hiryo chapter 7 . 3/7/2014
A great chapter and great character development.
Still wonder how it goes further especially with Ranma and Rei . Want to know as well about the others. ;)
| suntan140 chapter 7 . 3/7/2014
awesome chapter wonder if rei will ever give them a chance? update soon
| Bookeater-otaku chapter 6 . 2/23/2014
Still good. I like how Haruka meddle with Ranma and Rei. And the last general is a yakusa? Could be helpfull and not so much at the same time.
| Meech Macko chapter 6 . 2/16/2014
Short chap...no probs here...
The only beef is, Ranma is still a damn womenizer Akane would be right about him bieng a casanova perv)...which does not fit his so called honourable personality...
I just hope he comes to his original character and comes out of the womenizing stage...there is absolutly no way Rei will like an immoral womeniser.
Ken seems to be on the good side of Rei...
| Bookeater-otaku chapter 5 . 2/13/2014
I like Ranma new personality. Still obvious to situation around him, still arrogant but his new love of women and now is appreciation for fine clothe make him... interesting. Its like a normal evolution. He had women trouble, he goes around dating left and right. He was always dirt poor, he buys nice thing.
I dont know if is personnality turned for the worst or Ranma finally got a break from being the butt of the story but its interesting none the less.
I am pretty sure Hotaru 'death scythe' as name. You should do some reaserch and use the proper name of the Sailor Senshi attacks and items.
Ranma should do some of his old technique and you should make up new one. It would spice up the fights a little.
I liked Hotaru personality in this one. She seems realy mature. But she made a mistake: She called Ami by her name while she was in sailor senshi mode, giving away her identity to Ranma when she tryed to hide it. In general the girls call themselves by their alias when in costume so that the general population dont learn their name.
It was a good chapter and i hope the next one will come soon.
| Meech Macko chapter 4 . 2/4/2014
It seems there are super powered OC here...if the are too super-powered they will turn into gary stu.
From what I can predict is; Rei will fall for this Metro guy and Ranma has to suffer even more heartbreak or rejection despite he only loved her in the past life...and this is present...Rei is maybe having initial attraction to Metro guy and its almost similar like Akane going mushy on Ryoga and not knowing of his curse.
IF Rei is anything like Akane...being too temperamental and untrusting. I seriously doubt Ranma being interested in another one too much like Akane.
It would seem fickle of Rei to fall for Metro OC here and then go for Ranma...
Is Kurama an OC...? or is he the Kurama from Yu Yu Hakusho.
I hope Ranma is the main character and not Kurama stealing the spotlight...hoping the OC wont tread to gary stu levels and upstage Ranma.
Ranma has more raw Skill and experience than Senshi who depend too much on Magic...in their NORMAL form they are not even Xian Pu's level Combat prowess.
Just my thoughts...
| Hiryo chapter 4 . 2/1/2014
Huh I get confused a bit about the emotions of them changing so fast without reading why.
About 'Ken' being sheltered by Rei in the past was out so fast, would be nice to have been mentioned earlier and less confusing.
Anyway still am hungry for how this story develops and love still it