Reviews for A Broom Isn’t Just A Broom
mallika chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
one thing..his middle name's bilius not brent.

othrwys no it was adult humour and i am just 14.

Augurey Song chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
Omigosh, I'm blushing!
Ms. Patil chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
oo la la...
CarEtoDreaM chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
o i loved that! so funny! D
leh chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
*grins at you like a maniac* oh, that was adorable. i love your mad writing skillz. :)
SillyGillie chapter 1 . 11/12/2003

Too funny!
Drone 233248 chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
::muffled laughter:: That was great. Hm, how many other people have got those brooms I wonder? Love your ending too.

Can't write much, it's really late and I'm too tired to focus well.

Write more shorts!
Playing Passerine chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
*gets twisted expression on face*

i don't if i should laugh or gag or snicker or roll my eyes...

they target toys like that at kids!
akane47 chapter 1 . 8/6/2003
LOL, BV! It was really creative of you to do a fanfic out of that vibrating broomstick thing :-p I also have no idea why they thought a vibrating broomstick would be fun for kids.

Anyhoo, I have to admit that the dialogue sounded a bit OOC, but then they're older, they're married and they're sweet-talking each other so it's no problem :) and Ron's "boxer-shorted rear" more than made up for that!

I also really enjoyed your references to things "rated for-adults-only" and "not suitable for people under seventeen years of age" :D Hee! You made it sound naughty but not sleazy. Good job!
HecatonchiresLM chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
I'm assuming this was inspired by the toy broom being removed from sale. Popular with the young girls it was _-
Flexi Lexi chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
lol. love the ending.
JennaMae chapter 1 . 12/31/2002
Oh my, so YOU wrote this ficlet! I saw this in the Good Ship thread there in SCUSA, and... wel... _
emoshun chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
haha. very cute .:giggles:. I really want u to finish Dark Child! :)
lise chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
i do believe sirius said it best, in one of those sappy christmas stories... "wanna ride my broomstick?"
Tabbycat aka M.e. G-C chapter 1 . 10/17/2002

LOL! What a twist! That certainly did NOT go where I expected - this was one of the most effective short fics I have ever read.


'“Naughty girl.”

“Dirty boy.”'


Great fic!~keep on writing ;)
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