|Reviews for Dragon's Bait|
| Rosemellen chapter 8 . 19h ago
I really enjoy this story :) Waayyyyyyyyy too much. Also, I like Lance, but I have a feeling that he is going to betray Arya or something. So I don't trust him. Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Rosemellen chapter 7 . 19h ago
Ahhh! I haven't been able to review! NOOOOOOOO! Also, I love what your are doing with the progression of the characters :) Sorry about the short review... Looking forward to the rest of the story!
| Jeneva Mehr chapter 8 . 3/10
I absolutely love this. Please keep posting and continue your wonderful story. Its great!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/10
This is just great, you have a great style, great attitude and character development and great grammar.
So many greats!
I hope you continue this.
| YellowWomanontheBrink chapter 8 . 3/10
Oh. My god.
ASDFGHJKL this is so cool and interesting and hilarious and dark all at the same time! I love it!
| Onesmartcookie78 chapter 8 . 3/10
Oh, Arya... don't you know that this is only going to get you in trouble in the end?
| Hope Diamond chapter 8 . 3/10
awwww, what a nice chapter, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!
| dragonlady98 chapter 8 . 3/9
Bad Arya. Shame on you for betraying Smaug and what trust he has in you
| Loki'sdreamer chapter 8 . 3/9
It's nice she has finally meet a human who is nice to her just hope this doesn't bake fire on her.
| Sada Pazaki chapter 8 . 3/9
Hmmmm...I'm not so sure I trust this Lance guy...he might he just a nice dude OR he might be an extremely clever actor. I look forward to finding out! Great chapter :D
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/8
Oooooooh arya and laaaaaance! Smaugs gonna be pissed! ;)
| MittknightDr chapter 8 . 3/8
... Oh Arya, Lance is gonna stab you in the back, no man flirts with a woman after he's just found out that his brother's dead...
| xSereneMeadowsx chapter 8 . 3/8
This chapter is so exciting! I love it! Oh Arya! I hope things don't go too bad there for ya! I like that you have another person in the Lonely Mountain now! It really adds in some tension! Lance seems like such a sweet guy. I wonder how Arya will do with hiding Lance in the library and just how long it'll last for before Smaug finds out about him. Yay for suspense! :D
I cannot wait for the next chapter! :D By the way, I don't feel like you're rushing this story at all! Scenes like this do need to happen eventually! You're doing well with the flow of the story and the characters and everything! :D
| Protagonist Of Life chapter 8 . 3/8
| Miolily chapter 8 . 3/8
Arya, what are you doing?! Smaug will SMELL him! O_O