I IT GOOD GOB YOUR SO GOOD AT WRITING

Well... This is amazing :D. I like your endings and mid-paragraphs having "Hey kyubey?" "Yeah?" "Shut up/Screw off."

Good two chapters

Yes, you updated! Omg that last line XD *sigh* Mami, pride isn't a good thing... it never is...

Dramatic here, perfect pace. Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Fantastic chapter, looking forward to the next update.

Goodness gracious, Homu and Nagisa are carrying the team! Put more trust into them!

Kyouko and Sayaka daaaw moment! But they gonna need more cubes.

I like this story, I look forward to an update.

This... This is amazing, you captured the emotion of all characters, you sir are a great writer, keep up the good work, dont let the updates down!

I love the motherly nature Mami bestows Nagisa with. It builds up nicely.

You caught my attention. You captured the emotions well.

Good details of her fight and the aftermath, quite like it. Sayaka really want to punish herself...

And Sayaka's stubbornness shows again. Seriously, she needs to stop and think every once in a while. Excellent chapter, but very sad. Looking forward to more!

Awesome story

Ah. So Homura does indeed have something similar to her old time-stop powers, time to read carefully from the beginning.

Hm, does Homura have her time-stop powers or something similar still?

Sayaka was displaced or moved to a few feet from Mami. I don't think it was Homura's time-stop power because Sayaka would definitely have noticed, so forced teleportation?

Sayaka takes another hit to her confidence, just a little more and she'll disappear just like she did originally without intervention.

I am very curious about what caused Sayaka to lose control of her magic. She seemed fine up till this point, though my memory of what's happened in the previous chapter isn't the best.

Kyoko lost her illusion magic due to the trauma of what her father did when he found out about her wish and rejected it.