|Reviews for Another Heart Calls|
| Justanotherfiveminutes chapter 4 . 10/22/2014
I loved this last chapter. I wonder if you don't feel do happy with it partly because you've spent do long editing it etc? I felt their conversation in it had, in some ways, more impetus than the previous ones. He's revealing more if himself than I think he intends and she is shifting her viewpoint more than she realises. For a girl who's feeling as angry as a volcano erupting she is certainly allowing herself a fair amount of reflection. It's great writing! Looking forward to more!
Also loving the kubler-Ross chapter titles, although I hope it's not actually a reference to death?!
| Justanotherfiveminutes chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
"I'm me, and I have my own weapons at my disposal"
Lines like this make reading fanfiction the joy it is. Can't wait to read the rest!
| jessnicole chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
| JuseaPeterson chapter 4 . 9/16/2014
I’m very glad that you updated. I was hoping you would update soon.
I do like how there is some light heartedness in this chapter. I will say that I was not expecting his request to be just a visit and yet when he specified it as much it made much more sense. I do feel for Klaus and I hope that Caroline lets him understand more and that she will understand a bit of him.
I'm glad there will be another chapter for this. I really like being in this Klaus and Caroline bubble even though it's hard as well. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
| ruca518 chapter 4 . 9/15/2014
| lost'n'whatnot chapter 4 . 9/13/2014
I love how well you've written Klaus and Caroline's interactions and Caroline's thoughts. I'm glad I caught this story before it ended. Can't wait fit the last few chapters :)
| tacker23 chapter 4 . 9/13/2014
I love this story. I can't wait to read more!
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/13/2014
So good! Thank you so much for finally updating! I am so ready for Klaroline in this story, so ready! Please update soon, though. Your words are so enticing that they make this story more realistic. You portay Caroline's thoughts very well, too. It's exactly the thoughts she would have thought. Please update soon though.
| Carolineforbesisawsome chapter 4 . 9/13/2014
Thank you for posting and hope truly that you up date soon. This chapter was amazing and I want to know Caroline's answered so bad lol
| ellerose77 chapter 4 . 9/12/2014
great update! xE
| ravenclawslibrary chapter 4 . 9/12/2014
THANK YOU for the update! I love the verbal back and forth of this fic, it feels like they're covering so much ground, it's hard to remember it's all taken place in one conversation.
Beautiful dynamic between them, yet again. I'm very eager to hear Caroline's answer and reaction :)
| Doggi-chan chapter 4 . 9/12/2014
Thanks for the shout out! You are welcome! Oh my gosh! You updated your story! I'm so happy. I absolutely adored the Caroline explosion of a rant! She had to really let him have it. She has flung all of their past interactions straight at him. I feel just terrible for Klaus. Then he clarified what he meant by stay with me. And I loved Caroline's reaction. This conversation was taken off course a bit then it got back to the main reason for her intervention; Tyler. There was so much emotions being exchanged and it was all wonderful. I want to see why you are building up this inner darkness in Caroline that you have included in this chapter, her coal being lit on fire? An emotional Klaus is always lovely. I really got inside his head and understood his emotions, as i has her that question at the end of the chapter. I was literally crying when I saw that you updated your story. I like that you are moving the story along. I don't mind if this story is a short one. You are the writer if you are done telling your story then you shouldn't feel forced to continue it because of your readers. Anyways, update when you can.
| xxxLeanniexxx chapter 4 . 9/12/2014
Aww is Klaus jealous of Tyler ? Hah
| Lady Knight Jocelyn chapter 4 . 9/11/2014
First, LOL to your opening Author's note comment (love that movie). Second, holy sh!t you are a writer! A compelling story/plotline (no, I am not being compelled just to say that). You write so vividly, and I love how Caroline and Klaus stay in character. Even though you have placed them in situations where it would be easy to falter with their character/nature, you stay true to them. That is an extremely difficult task to do as a write so colour me impressed! I look forward to future updates (hopefully maybe pretty please a little bit faster than before)?! All the same, keep up the amazing work! I do eagerly await what you have planned ahead. Though I do wish this could be longer than a short story. Alas, it does not lessen my love for it.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/11/2014
Loooove this story :D so well written!