Reviews for Once More
Pinkypi chapter 11 . 2/18
I agree with all the changes except the boots. The sandals are the superior footwear for Shinobi life.
sumit chapter 9 . 2/16
why make the scene so stupid like canon.
if a person has enough time to run and stand in front of chiddori then he must have enough time to jut grab the hand from side and move it away from target simple.
Brian chapter 7 . 1/29
Sigh I promise no flames. I already gave my reasons for Anko x Naruto and I already said my piece how I feel about Hinata. Yea she is a good character and wish a real life Hinata is around. I just wanted Anko x Naruto to happen really bad. So meanwhile if the hints are anything serious maybe we will get Kakashi x Kurenai? Since this is fanfic, we don’t always have to have canon relationship happening do we? Hence my argument for Anko x Naruto. Good luck getting past Kurenai hating if perverted things like the book Kakashi always has.
Brian chapter 4 . 1/29
Well let’s be honest here. Sakura sending Ino flying in no big feat. Both Sakura and Ino are pretty weak strength wise. Both girls barely trained because of their crush. But fanfics are all about a little twist here and there. Still you have an uphill battle with me if you want me to care about Sakura. Now on to romance I have a suggestion for you. Anko Miterashi. Anko like Naruto is hated by Konoha for events beyond their control. Anko being the student of Orochimaru the biggest traitor of Konoha and Naruto is hated by Konoha for containing Kurama. Both Anko and Naruto are outcasts. Both are passionate and impulsive and fun loving people. Both are named after food. As a result,Anko and Naruto can connect with each other better then anyone else can. I do like Hinata but she gets so many stories about Naruto x Hinata and poor Anko barely gets any. Or more likely gets shoehorned into a relationship that simply doesn’t work. I do like the idea of the Bijuu all being inside of Naruto,it’s definitely an original idea.
bibink729 chapter 1 . 1/21
please pair kurama with Naruto yugito, guren, yugao and not hinata
sumikoo chapter 8 . 1/9
Saitama reference
Xblade chapter 45 . 12/15/2023
Are you planing to continue the story or did you drop it?
Pixelitus chapter 11 . 12/14/2023
HOLY-

Pffft. You do realize that Hashirama was the one to *capture* the Tailed Beasts? Eh, maybe when this was posted that sort of thing about the series wasn’t known. Still really weird though.
Pixelitus chapter 9 . 12/14/2023
Oh damn. Healing a Chidori hole is a bit extreme, but…maybe? Nine Tailed Beasts after all…
Pixelitus chapter 8 . 12/14/2023
This feels…kind of OOC in some aspects if I’m being honest. Naruto just doesn’t feel right. Even if he time traveled and is more mature, Naruto still has the same sort of “base personality” in Shippuden and even in Boruto that just doesn’t match here. Maybe it’s just me, I don’t know.
Username6166 chapter 30 . 11/30/2023
Weird retcon
Username6166 chapter 23 . 11/30/2023
Lmao did he really need Sakura to teach him a lesser version of a D-rank jutsu? Hell, it isn't even any different from using more chakra for tree climbing.
Username6166 chapter 15 . 11/30/2023
Jet Step is just a weaker Body Flicker, and you seem to have forgotten that Neji has 360 degree vision. Also, it makes no sense that Sakura was able to stand up again after that attack, it's not something that determination and the bs power of friendship would affect. It also makes no sense how she was able to activate the stored chakra *after* having her chakra network blocked. If she activated it beforehand then it would make sense, but she didn't.
Username6166 chapter 14 . 11/30/2023
Nepotism strikes again
Username6166 chapter 11 . 11/30/2023
In the manga, Itachi was the one who slaughtered all the children and the non-combatant Uchiha while Obito was the one who killed the police force. So technically Obito is the hero while Itachi is just a sicko.
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