Epic story author sheeeesh

Hn. Lame...happy go lucky... still the naivet evn after losing everyone & everything.

this story has some potential, but here is where I'll stop. There was some part that made me frown, like where you made Haku a girl (why not) and thought that it was necessary to mention her panties.

but there is one sentence that made me think "okay, I'll stop hereTailed beast or not, she's still a girl. And you cannot expect a girl to take it as well as a boy."

first I call bullshit.

Second, this is not the kind of morals I want to support.

I wish you a bright future all the same, but I won't read more of that story.

i really liked the hinata parts

Naruto: "So… what kind of affinity do I have, sensei?"
Kakashi: "yes"

The fact you had naruto tell so many people he is from the future defeats the purpose of the whole excitement of time travel he shouldn’t be telling people this unless he has absolutely no choice or is towards the end of his conflict with his enemies. It’s taking the easy way out and just shows lazy writing on your side. Logically speaking he shouldn’t be so hesitant to use his power when the whole point is to make a better future and do whatever It takes to achieve that goal. Your naruto power scaling makes zero sense. Prime example of this is when naruto allowed itachi to kidnap him and resulted with losing his arms which I think served no purpose to the story, itachi for as skilled as he is shouldn’t be able to match naruto in this story. Naruto knows all of itachis capabilities fight should have been over with naruto killing or subduing itachi. Sorry just the flow of events of this story are illogical.

its surprising that naruto with all tailed beasts is still weaker than naruto with only nine tails.

tell me, did time travel mess with this naruto's head or are you planning to make him plane idiot? he alone holds most detailed knowledge of the future and yet he is throwing his life away like it was nothing. bloody moron

Hello I wanna say thanks for continuing to update this story for so long now. I had actually started to reread it starting from chapter 1 again, I greatly enjoyed reading your writing these few years. Happy July 4th

I dont like fem kurama it's gross

If you're gonna do NaruHina at least make it interesting. Idk if it's because cannon bare ly expanded on it but NaruHina pairings are some of the worst shit I've read in fanfiction. Always boring, plain and forced to all extremes

Gyuki was the easiest to imagine XD

Can you upload the chapter fast please?

Despite supposedly being "canon", the movie wastes no time in retconning the story. Opening scene has Naruto attempt to use the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu... something that he learns in the very first chapter. (Red inking the script, eh Kishimoto? But you couldn't be bothered to point out such a blatant contradiction like that)

So where do I begin... for a movie called Naruto... he's not really the main character: Hinata is. Yeah, Hinata... that girl who somehow became very popular despite appearing in less than 100 chapters out of a 700 chapter series. (Which Kishimoto often puzzled over) Well, Studio Pierrot who animates the Naruto anime pretty much came to him about this movie, in fact, they went out of their way to animate her into fillers and gave her abilities she never had. They had wear her revealing clothing regardless of whether or not it fit her character and they always gave the good animation to her which often left the rest of the series with shit animation. (Episode 167 of Shippuden comes to mind)

So the "plot" of this movie and I define that loosely is that Hinata wants to knit Naruto a scarf, at the same time some guy who lives on the moon comes to the planet because he wants to marry Hinata because she's the "Byakugan Princess." (What even IS that?) Y'know what the Naruto series needed? More bullshit magic eye powers! Because we didn't get enough of that with the asspulls the Sharingan pulled out! Oh, and Hanabi gets kidnapped that little girl who was in, I think, 2 chapters. ...(I didn't even remember she HAD a sister)

So Naruto pretty much gets genjutsued into seeing that Hinata loves him... which completely sends the message: "Hey! Don't worry if you can't confess! A magical genjutsu will fix every problem for you!" ...yeah. So anyway, Naruto looks more... guilty than anything than they pretty much kill any Naruto/Sakura stuff by claiming it was the result of rivalry... (yeah... right.) Because apparently girls don't move on from their first crush.. (Yes, that's why we have divorce, right?) So... really... who am I rooting for here? The asshole who wants to make a girl his bride... or the other asshole who wanted a girl to fuel his pathetic rivalry. ...(double standard really)

Most of all, the movie's script is pretty much just how amazing and wonderful a person Hinata is... when if I was go by this movie... she isn't. She spends far more time knitting the scarf for Naruto than she actually does caring for the sister
and doesn't seem too concerned about her wellbeing. If anything her priorities are... Naruto, Knitting scarf and rescuing Hanabi is a distinct third on her priorities. Hinata, you know what happened when my brother went missing? I was worried out of my mind. You know what I wasn't doing? Knitting scarves and thinking about crushes. So yeah... you are quite a terrible sister.

Mostly, it's biggest flaw... it's just boring. Nothing happens... by an hour in, I was praying for the movie to end. From what I can tell Japanese fans were pretty upset with this movie.

Most of the reviews point out that the romance was forced and awkward, but what most people were pissed off about the movie was the false advertising... three characters were heavily advertised: Naruto, Sasuke and Kakashi. Well... the latter 2 are BARELY in this movie. (Sasuke's in it for about 17 seconds tops, normally I'd find that hilarious, but in this case... even I prayed he'd show up because he'd snap Naruto out of being so out of character)

Naruto was supposed to be a series about bonds, this movie is all about making sure Hinata, a supporting character (they even mocked Sakura for losing her heroine status in this movie which... I must admit was pretty damn low of them) got her happy ending. The Last is nothing. Nothing but Studio Pierrot enacting their Hinata fetishes and that's when I realized something. Hayao Miyazaki was absoutely right.

The anime industry is filled with otakus and this is why Naruto last movie is not canon and here is your evidence stop lying your ass off fan like you give a Bad Name the real Naruto fans

She used Mugen tsukuyomi with moon on different dimension