Reviews for Once More |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Thanks for posting |
![]() ![]() ![]() while this chapter is close to canon, it is still an AMAZING chapter. keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's pretty sure Son Goku is that Son Goku and i think Saikyo is Natsume Maya from tengou tenge... ... Shukaku... i can only imagine Misty from Pokemon with a little color changes on the cloths... please uplaod soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for posting this story! I'm really excited to read more, hopefully soon :P |
![]() ![]() Pretty sure son goku is...son goku? |
![]() ![]() Hahahahahaha! Poor Naruto :)) Looking great! Update soon! 3 |
![]() ![]() Great start. Keep up the good work. Hopefully it won't be too similar to the manga. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah, this is good story,. Hmm..Naruto befriend with with all bijuus, and their different personality, i think that's great. Please dont make the story into harem dude.. The story really interesting, and you made Naruto's personality in your fic almost similar like in the canon,. it's cool 'ttebayo.! (_)v |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the new chapter ! The interaction between Naruto and the Bijû was fun to read. Especially the clothing part. And the training with Konohamaru was great too. Of course the Sandaime would know there was a probleme with the blond. Things will get even more fun I'm sure. Can't wait for the next chapter. Everyday life with the 9 Bijû in human form ? I can't wait. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() if he has the 4 tails in him then doesnt that let him use lava release? update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is very good so far for your first story, even more so because english isn't your second language! Keep up the amazing work, and this story will become a big hit in no time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon |
![]() ![]() 'How was the the story so far? If you like it, Please let me know :D' Like it? Bullshit. I love it. There are too many 'mature and powerful/god Naruto' fics out there. From what I can see, Naruto retains his personality so yay! Although I question the fact Naruto is somehow able the contain all nine bijuu. Fair warning though, remember not to forget any bijuu. So don't forget to include Shukakuu, Matabii and the others. Also, do the other jinchuriki still have their bijuu? The answer is obvious, but how can two things exist at once? Hopefully you'll explain it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a very interesting start. I am wanting to know as continuous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto with all the bijû ? Now it is promising ! It was fun until then. I look forward to read more. ;) |