Reviews for Once More |
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![]() ![]() chapter 1 was rely good |
![]() ![]() Those still complaining about hinata pairing, it’s time to find another fandom. Also, enough about harems and Anko grooming pedaphile acting, it’s disturbing. |
![]() ![]() Naruto with konohamaru being hilarious XDD also pretty easy for the hokage to suspect naruto to the point of coaxing a confession already so soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has so much inconsistencies . Also the authour takes very high liberties with his writing like introducing Phoneix, and mithril. Neji is quoting Dumbledore . Even though naruto is 16 year old time traveler ,he is just always being beaten. The canon Naruto did better against Gaara than this Naruto. Naruto had went with Fuu on a training trip and they are not a couple? You never explored Karin, fuu, haku relationship and characters with naruto. Naruto went back in time, his priority should be training himself, learning different kind of jutsus, and trying to save every single person he can. Instead he has no prior strategy , is always procrastinating , like during the invasion he had no plan himself, just trusting hokage. He could have spawned 10000 shadows clone and helped save the civilians. Instead he went to fight Gaara, who Naruto could have disabled from the start with seal given by jiraya(last minute given by jiraya , not narutos plan). so this story just frustrated and angered me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this story is great only probable i have with it s the fact you chose hinata as his girllike fuu is right there, i don't have a problem with people who like hinata but in fanfics there just too many narutoxhinata pairings and not enough of other pairings, i personaly just don't like Hinata cause she's too timid but in this story she was fine but I still think fuu is a better option then hinata. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man is a shame thst this fic seems abandoned since is funny as hell, the characters are lively filled with lot of personality (more than canon even) and the overall writing is extremely good that make you never stop reading. |
![]() ![]() Author san, you shouldn’t let readers bully you into writing about their fantasies. Keep to your own creativity and those that don’t like it will move on. But I promise you alot more will enjoy as long as you keep to your authenticity. Actually, readers who still whine about naruhina at this point, should think about finding another fandom and stop ruining for other readers. Thank you for your fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally... A good Naruto fanfic... I thought those were rumors only existing in myths and legends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The author is really acknowledged about the three years training. Many people compained that Naruto didn't learn anything aside the odama rasengan but that's completely wrong. The training was to adapt Naruto's body to handle the Kyuuby chakra and his own Uzumaki storage. Had not been for that training Naruto wouldn't had never mastered the Raseenshuriken or Sage Mode in record time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Any fic featuring Naruto and the Nine Bijuus inside him is my cup of tea, I just love them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a bit disappointed that 1st and 2nd Hokage wont stay permanently |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shukaku and Kurama bonding over mutual hatred for Uchiha's! Revived 1st and 2nd Hokage. Yeah, dont fuck with Konohagakure |
![]() ![]() ![]() so its harder for naruto from the future with 9 tailed beast to beat garra then cannon naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree with all the changes except the boots. The sandals are the superior footwear for Shinobi life. |