Reviews for Once More |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Killing children is a huge W fr fr |
![]() ![]() ![]() "normal human can hold their breath for about three minutes" What world do you live in? It's thirty to ninety seconds, not three minutes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmqo thanks for the meme |
![]() ![]() ![]() "you and what army" reminds my when oversiplified explained bento mussolini |
![]() ![]() ![]() two Fate references in one chapter nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, but using a wind style technique n a ire style technique will only make the fire style technique stronger. Theyre just adding more oxygen to the fire... |
![]() ![]() ![]() he had me until you made the tailed beasts have human forms |
![]() ![]() damn bro you made Tsunade a super bitch in this one |
![]() ![]() ![]() WTF SHIROU IS THAT YOU! COUNTER GURDIAN EMIYA! ACTUALLY SATAN! WTF IS GOING ON HERE |
![]() ![]() ![]() this meme is over used. over nine thousand times |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry about all of the haters attacking your fic. If they don't like they shouldn't read. it's their own fault that they can't be decent human beings. good job on your story though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Be more logical and less God |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's really sad that you had to actually write in here that as the author, you murdered naruto in a way that is horrible and cruel, letting him slowly die in a lonesome void, just to get this character here and justify your temporal paradox bullshit. Fucking disgusting emotional drama farming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuck not naruhina |
![]() ![]() ![]() ITS FUCKING SHIT-FIC |