This, like many other fanfics, is horrible

This is really sad

It ends... Overall, this fic is awesome. Maybe I'll see more of your works next time, buddy. :)

Good luck and keep up the AMAZING work! And have a fantastic day too, buddy! O:)

Sincerely,
Karanma Maeryl

This is just so cute... Love this Chappie very much! x3

Move on to the next one!

Best way to end a story on a good note I had fun reading the story.

This is.a good chapter

This Chapter is AMAZING... More things ready to be revealed... :D

Keep up the awesome work and have a good day, buddy! O:)

Sincerely,
Karanma Maeryl

Wow... Welcome back, buddy! Glad you update this fic! And to hear you're doing fine now makes me happy! :D

Amazing work as always! Looking forward for the next one! ;3

Have a good day, buddy! O:)

Sincerely,
Karanma Maeryl

When u get better until then I will wait when the next chapter out . I hope u feel better best of luck on getting better

Wow, this story is very AMAZING... Thank you for sharing this with all us! It's touching... :3

I'll make sure to keep an eye on this. :D ..Good luck and keep up the AMAZING work! Also, have a good day, buddy! O:)

Sincerely,
Karanma Maeryl

This was a sad chapter, seeing Ivo's mother and all. I'm glad he's not permanenty dead... right?

That was a emotional chapter. Loved it

You have great writing potential. But you may need to look over your work first. Because I see a lot of spelling errors in most of your stories. Maybe you should get yourself a beta reader to look your work in the future. But other than that, not bad. ;)

Good chapter. Keep it up! Good luck on the next one.

The story is getting good I feel eggmans pain.