Any chance of an update? It has been 5 years after all.

i'll just wait then... WHY ARE ALL GOOD IZ STORIES ON HOLD!

I sure hope Dib and Tak fail horribly.

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Hmm, interesting! Considering I'm also writing a 'fic with Dib and Tak right now, I thought it was pretty good!
I usually don't like those unusual "skip to teenager" large gaps in time, but the way it was handled was pretty smooth, and I was able to get into the story by the end of the first chapter. I also thought the joke about the old-fashioned vampires was awesome! (Considering that Dib would obviously know all that stuff...)
Anyways, it was pretty-cool!

this is really good, i like how zim is in character hehe :) dib seemed a little OOC (Out Of Character) in the first chapter, but in the second he seemed more like himself. i like how you did the flashback. sometimes people leave those out so the reader has to go look up the episode and rewatch it to understand what's going on. anyways, really good, i look forward to seeing an update :D

I really think Dib should not have let Tak in.

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Dib's view is quite believable indeed.

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