Reviews for An Uzumaki in Arendelle |
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![]() ![]() Hi, this is a great story and I've been getting attached to it lately. I'd like you to continue it and I wish you the best until next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story. Very interesting way to combine the two stories and result in a fun slice of life. Great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story continues to be amazing. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "What's with all the kids?" Kristoff asked, having moved closer to the group. "The kitchen made Naruto-sized portions by mistake, and we thought the orphans would like to come back for a nice meal," Anna replied, stationed next to her boyfriend. "Speaking of, I've got a report on our favorite blond," the gruff man said, until he looked towards Elsa. "Second favorite," he amended, not wanting to insult the queen, before taking off his cap and looking up at his own hair, "third favorite." "You can tell us over dinner." Elsa said with a chuckle, looking over the children still gathered around her. "I think it's time for everyone to go wash up before we eat." Although many of the children groaned and huffed, all of them hurried off to get ready for dinner. Ingrid and Elsa sharded a large smile before the young girl followed after her friends. While Anna and Kristoff joined the caretakers in herding the children towards the nearest washrooms. Leaving Elsa alone. The queen's palm was still filled with the miniature snowy scene. A quick thought was all it took for everything to change, as a replica of the ice palace rose up. With two figures standing in front of the structure. One a man and the other a woman. Their fists touching, the same as her's and Naruto's had yesterday when they said goodnight. As had become their secret tradition over the past few months. Dismissing the scene from her hand, Elsa stood and walked towards the kitchen. Eager to hear how her friend was fairing on the mountain. Hopefully he had cooled down a little. - Awww. Cute and sweet. Gotta have a orphanage of kids to make up for Naruto absence lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hombre, entiendo lo que es tener complicaciones y no poder escribir por mucho tiempo, te deseo suerte y espero que puedas retomar más seguido estos fics que, sinceramente, son de lo mejor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Part of Elsa wondered if the roles had been reversed if Naruto would have told the children fantastical stories about trolls and living snowmen. Never bothering with keeping anything from the young ones, but instead ensuring their safety on his own like a loving father. Sometimes it was hard to be the queen and think of the safety of all her subjects. No matter how small they were. "Is the going to come back?" the soft words of Igrid broke the queen from her inner thoughts. Still kneeling Elsa raised her hand and smiled as she wiped away the young girls tears. "I don't think there's anything that could keep him away for to long. You know how strong he is," Elsa said, feeling her chest lighten with each word. "And when he's all healed and comes back, I'll bet he's going to give you a great big hug." Elsa felt content at the smiling faces of all the children, and a couple of the adults that had joined the crowd also curious about the ninjas whereabouts. There was only one last question from Ingrid, and Elsa didn't know how to answer it. "Do you think he will he give me a shoulder ride, like some of the other girl's papas do." - Made me cry my eyes. Oh, the girl sees Naruto as papa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Muy bien capitulo, se te extraño el tiempo en que se encontraba desaparecido, es bueno saber que se encuentra bien |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Young man," the words borke Naruto from his examination as Pabbie walked towards him. "With all of this commotion I had almost forgotten to ask if this was your's." The old troll held out his hand, and laying in his rock palm was a simple piece of metal. A symbol was etched into the front of it, while the burned away remnants of a black cloth were attached to the back. Naruto was quick to grab hold of it. "Thank you for finding this," he said holding it to his chest. Pabbie laughed. "I like to think you merely left it here while you were recovering," the troll stated as he stood next to the shinobi, both watching the others finalise their plans. "I am glad that you found some friends in this place who are so willing to help you." Naruto stared forward. Elsa and Anna had taken to loading Kristoff's sleigh with what looked like a woven grass bag of potatoes. The mountain man was having a mock conversation with his reindeer friend, and every troll was moving around their home with practiced ease. "They are precious to me," was all he said with a large grin. Pabbie laughed in agreement. - Awww. Wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Are the memories bad?" the sudden question broke the girl from her thoughts. She gave a moment of pause, not having considered whether these changed memories were bad. "No," she started off hesitantly, "I remember having fun with Elsa as we played in the snow. She must have been using her powers, but I don't remember her using them at all." "Were your original memories of having fun with Elsa." "Oh yeah, I could never forget how great it was to hang out with her," Anna punctuated her statement by throwing her fist in the air, a renewed vigor to the redhead. "Then what is the problem?" Anan froze mid pose, not really expecting the question. "I meant how you never forgot the good, it is just different than how you remember," Naruto clarified, hoping he hadn't said something wrong. He hadn't, but it still got Anna thinking. What really was wrong with having different memories than she felt she should have. No matter what, she and Elsa had been best buddies as kids, and now that the truth was out in the open, nothing was ever going to change that again. So what if she didn't remember Elsa having powers before her coronation, now that she knew, everything had been going perfectly. - Dear sweet Naruto with words of wisdom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She could have let him out under the guardianship of Anna. But for as much as she loved her sister, leaving the ever spirited redhead alone with the enigmatic blonde seemed like a recipe for disaster. The queen shivered at the thought of what her sister could convince the displaced blonde to do. - Rofl Love it. Those two would be a wild match. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is wrong with Kurama? And ooh, Naruto saving the orphanage making a impression. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto saves orphans! But awakens Kyuubi a bit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, lol Naruto spooked by Olaf. Ooooh, Elsa getting worked up thinking of Naruto and his warmth. And getting a language book to finally learn more of his language to speak. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And he did in fact remain quiet. He never made a sound during the meeting. Thankfully it was a short meeting, and Elsa didn't need to worry about how long Naruto would remain silent. Once the merchants left Elsa turned back towards Naruto and saw that he was still sitting in his bed smiling at her, when he spoke. "Hime." Elsa froze as Naruto said it. He had tried talking to her many times, but the words never held any real meaning for her. Yet what he had just spoken seemed to draw her to him. He hadn't said them in a particularly special way, but how the words seemed to be meant just for her brought a smile to her face. Pointing at herself Elsa parroted back the strange words causing Naruto to nod and began to weave his fingers around above his head. She was confused at first, but eventually figured out that he was trying to signifying a crown or headpiece. Figuring out what he meant Elsa called for a servant to bring her tiara, that she usually didn't wear, and immediately put it on when it arrived. Doing a quick curtsy to try and convey her royal position, Elsa stood to the sound of Naruto clapping at her display. Looking at the broad smile on Naruto's face it was all Elsa could do to keep from laughing and retain her royal demeanor. - True that. Nice Oh dear, meeting Sven and Olaf would surprise anyone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Na-ru-to," she seemed to have said his name correctly as he once again began smiling and nodded his head rapidly at her success. Smiling softly she took a few seconds to turned towards the clock on the wall wondering what time it was. "Elsa?" the boy said drawing her attention back towards him. Once she was looking at him again he began to say her name again followed by his own as his hands pointed towards both of them in correspondence with his words. As he kept speaking Elsa got the feeling that he was more seeking acknowledgment that he was right instead of practicing. Nodding her head in agreement caused the Naruto to let out a load "Yatta," before he began to talk quickly in whatever language he spoke and just didn't stop. Eventually Elsa found herself sitting in her chair again as she just listened to the foreign words. She may not understand any of them, but she didn't really need to. All that mattered for that short period of time was that Naruto, the boy she had promised to protect, was awake and judging by the amount of energy he showed, well on his way to being fully recovered. - Fabulous start. Love how this is coming alpng, very well done. |