|Reviews for Aloftsoar|
| siledubh chapter 6 . 3/2
This was beautiful - which doesn't do it justice. Thanks you for writing and sharing this gorgeous piece of writing!
| msmargo chapter 6 . 2/27
So I just came back to read this again. Love it to death. Every girl's fantasy.
| Debbie in S. Florida chapter 6 . 2/26
Oh, I didn't know you were going to cause me tears! Yet here they are, running down my cheeks. Lovely. Just absolutely lovely. And so sweet. I mean, they slept-really slept-in the bed together! How sweet is that?
And just as I thought, I want more! I wanted it not to end! I wanted twenty more chapters! Thirty! Please, consider giving us a futuretake? Something? I want-need-to know what happened when he came back after tour. My imagination is nowhere as amazing as yours!
Totally, thoroughly loved this. Am going to rec it to everyone. You are an extremely talented writer. Your words make me so happy.
| Debbie in S. Florida chapter 5 . 2/26
Awww, her camera really was working. Now I love him even more. I love how awkward he is with her, this huge star who should have all the confidence in the world, yet he's real and fumbling and sweet. Love that. I'm loving this story, yet I'm sad to click to the next chapter, knowing it's almost over.
| Debbie in S. Florida chapter 4 . 2/26
Oh, god, the words you create. I have to go back and reread, just to experience them again! Pure and lovely. I'm so enjoying your style! I especially love "tanglemess"! That is exactly the word for my hair! Perfect!
I can't believe she didn't tell him she'd been there till afterwards. And then she didn't agree to meet with him? Ugh, now I'm dying. And he wrote a song for her. That just killed me. I mean, what could be more amazing than someone being inspired enough to write a song for you? Too much. And then he stopped and called her? In the middle of his show. Ugh, please tell me she answers...
| Debbie in S. Florida chapter 3 . 2/26
Oh, my. He's coming to her town. The question is, will she tell him, or will she not?
| Debbie in S. Florida chapter 2 . 2/26
Okay, I can already tell I'll be wanting this to last longer! 2 chapters in, and I'm dying for more... I think I'd feel the same way as she does, pretending my camera's broken, but obviously, if she wants this to go any further, that's gotta change. I'm sure she's much lovelier than she gives herself credit for. Can't wait to see what he thinks.
| Debbie in S. Florida chapter 1 . 2/26
I read a very sweet review for your story on Ficsisters, and your summary intrigued me, so I had to come read! The review was perfectly accurate-your words are magical and definitely written with poetry and whimsy. I can't wait to read the rest, and then whatever else you've written or will write! So glad I found that website and then you!
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/24
A very sweet story. Thanks for sharing!
| buffbronze chapter 6 . 2/26
This was recced on Fic Sisters.
You have a talent. A beautiful talent.
Gorgeous words and unique storytelling. I loved this.
| Zina588 chapter 6 . 2/24
Lovely story, loved it!
| sweetncole22 chapter 6 . 2/24
This was a great mini story.
| TangerSoto chapter 6 . 2/22
Thank you for story. They are so brave))) they take the chance)
| sulliedsoles chapter 6 . 2/18
i take a particular sort of pleasure in words and writing that don't conform. i love your style; your writing is poetic and your story was just lovely. i'm even going to break my rule and read your wips, just because i want more. :) thank you for being brave, for sharing, and for giving us such poetic-prose.
| Skinnyj chapter 6 . 2/16
What a sweet story.