Reviews for Elements of Opposition |
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![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS SO GOOD! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH PLSSS I HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS CUZ ITS CLEARLY THAT IT ISNT YET |
![]() ![]() is this never going to be finished? |
![]() ![]() Man I love this story hopefully we will get the conclusion soon |
![]() ![]() Nice, a bit disturbing but great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I've binge read all of the story, and I think it's amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, if that isn't the final nail on the opposition, I don't know what is! I really like the high-stakes move done in this chapter. I can only hope Discord survives for a happy ending. I really want to see what the ending is. Excellent chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, you mentioned the movie! Fitting since Fluttershy taking to Other Spike reminded of me of her talking to one of the Storm minions. Just as planned, no doubt. Yay, Pinkie didn't die! You had us worried for a while there. Loved the battle over the hydra too, the way they had to frame everything just so so that it would understand them. Poor Other Spike. Good thing your version of Twilight is better at magic than canon Twilight and thus can analyze spells on the fly like that. Also, good thing Twilight's Dark Magic binge turned her into a Voldemort-level idiot. "I hit the alicorn with a heart stop spell and she pretty much brushed it off, I'll just keep throwing those around though, surely the thing that didn't work before will work if I just keep using it." Order is not nice, and apparently not smart either. And next chapter we'll finally find out if removing Matrisse from Twilight frees her or if Discord's "Matrisse that thinks it's Twilight but is really Matrisse because Twilight Sparkle is dead" theory is true. Once again, your ability to juggle multiple plot threads and their interactions shines in this battle. The ending was awesome. Everything was awesome! Wow is there really only one chapter left? Maaaaybe two? If reharmonizing the Elements doesn't force Matrisse to let go and they have to save her somehow...lol or defeat One Winged Angel Matrisse. Ok, probably not that one. *huggles you* |
![]() ![]() I am dying and i cannot live on without an ending, but this gives me so many mixed feelings. I love it |
![]() ![]() I spent a good few days obsessively blasting through this fic at every possible opportunity. Let me tell you, I cannot describe the panic I felt when I finished chapter 15 and realized all the plot points couldn't POSSIBLY be tied up in just one more chapter! I need to know how this ends like I need water! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An update! I've been waiting all this time and I was so excited to see elements of opposition in my notifications! I am love love loving it! Best mlp fic on this site |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally, a less evil cliffhanger. I mean, that's not a good order. But it's quite clear there's loophole abuse incoming. :P *fangirl squee* So nice to see any update from you, but when this one, my favorite fic of your fics updates *happy batpony noises* it's even better. Discord warning Spike away from being the Chaos Avatar was interesting. All their banter was great, but that was...interesting. He's right though, either Spike would try to use that power to help, and sooner or later it would all backfire, or it would drive Spike mad, and who knows what'd happen then? That exchange about how if Discord knew how much Spike knew he'd know how much to tell Spike was probably my favorite of that discussion. Discord telling Spike to shush because a grown up is talking gets second place, cuz it's just *funny*. *huggles Harmony Fluttershy* Loved her section too. Creepy Twilight was well done. Still can't decide if Discord's right, but the narration points to him being wrong. Not that that means much with you, you sneaky, awesome, detailed writer you. Update another story soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh My Gosh! This story is finally updated, yay! Except this is also really dark and quite psychologically intimidating... Anyways love the intricacies in the plot, I love everything about it! Keep writing, and I can't wait for the next update after that cliff hanger! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am freaking out! This story is toooo gooood! Your use of canon and especially your own lore is just so well done! As much as I want to know what happens next, I'm gonna be patient, because you are ALWAYS worth the wait! Also, your Spike and Discord banter is THE BEST. Always a highlight! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You live great to see this story again |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your stories, it seems like the mature aspect in a world that would seem too pink in real life. But you really know how to make these aspects so they don't conflict. Besides, I really like Discord as a character and I think you are very talented in writing him. Can't wait to see what's next! |