|Reviews for The Ambiguous Artifice|
| Adefina chapter 2 . 10/29
I’m not sure why I’m reviewing on such an old chapter, but I have to say, I think having Bill being in the lower alleys and randomly seeing Harry is so funny! I’m slowly making my way through these old fics. Also, this story is just so well written, it’s amazing.
| Piletorn chapter 15 . 7/10
Thank you for writing this great story!
Off to find the next installation
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/8
You are such a brilliant writer! I can’t even imagine how difficult it was to keep the timelines straight this book! I adore Harry’s journey and the dropped canon from Tamara Pierce’s world make me giggle every time. Honestly the world you’ve created here is miles and miles beyond the original HP series-the lore, magic, characters, and world are so much more complex and delightful. If you published this, I would 100% buy it. As is, can’t wait to see how it wraps up!
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/28
autism wins fr
| ArachnidHiveMind chapter 8 . 3/13
So like is the amount of extra time she is using not gonna use up her poly juice?
| BerserkLittleCook chapter 1 . 3/11
I feel like this series is the embodiment to the song "Complicated" by Avril Lavigne
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/10
Very surprised that people still don't understand your characterization of Harry after two books. Loving the story!
| CreativeMode chapter 16 . 2/21
Epic as always! Your a very talented writer.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2022
ok major spoilers ahead...
I really really hope Leo and Harry don't end up together! I'm sorry, but she's twelve! He's 17 now! That's like a high schooler dating a middle schooler! He's literally an adult, and worse, he's basically a mentor figure to her. He teaches her how to fight, teaches her about the lower alleys, and tries to look out for her,,, the fact that after all that, when she's like, what 14 or 15, he expresses ROMANTIC interest in her... I get that in general, and for the time, 4 or 5 years isn't that big of an age gap. BUT! they met and became "friends" at very different stages of their life, Leo as a King, responsible for his kingdom, basically an adult, and Harry as a student still in school looking for work over the summer... at least Caelum and Harry have always been equals, always been rivals and students together, despite the similar age difference. Obviously, I'd prefer Draco, because they're the same age and have grown up together, but then the time turner happens and they aren't the same age anymore, and either way I feel like Harry (through trauma lol) has matured more than Draco at this point anyways, so... idk I'm not much of a shipper despite the fact that I wrote this long ass review on the subject, I wouldn't care if Harry ends up with no one! In fact I'd love that! But the Leo Harry thing... it rubs me the wrong way I hate age differences I've seen too many of my friends messed up from dating older guys...
sorry wow that was a lot. I love this series tho! I just... fear
| aki93 chapter 16 . 12/22/2022
| Emma McPhee chapter 11 . 12/21/2022
Long time reader, since book two, now not ment to be insulting, I'm ADHD Autistic, but Rigle reads as Autistic, and as people put a lot of them selves in their characters, if you haven't looked into please do, again ment as friendly and helpful, if this is not the case, their still the best characters and my favourite books of all books. hugs.
| MonicaSage chapter 16 . 8/25/2022
Amazing. You have managed to pack so much adventure in this series in a way that actually makes sense. Other fanfics go into alot of detail about summers and it feels like filler, in this series the interaction qith the court of rogues ect are something I look forward to reading about as much as Harrys time at Hogwarts.
This is honestly the type of series that you finish reading and immediatly wish you could obliviate yourself so you can read it again.
This series is in the list of books I can't wait to reread when I am old and sitting with a cup of tea, and even if I am feeble or in ill health its stories like this that can make life worth living.
| You Matter chapter 15 . 8/8/2022
POSSIBLE PLOT HOLE:
Uhhhhm GUYS? What if when Rigel eventually diassapears (assuming all goes to plan with the backup escape route) and suddenly Harry is TWO years older than she's supposed to be?! Can't at least one person (Leo's Mum) discern age accurately?!
| You Matter chapter 13 . 8/6/2022
You guyssssss when.. if... Snape finds out that Rigel isn't really Rigel, I am frankly scared how he'll react.
| You Matter chapter 11 . 7/28/2022
"No one fooled Tom Riddle and lived to gloat about it."... we'll see about that ;)