Wow I really see how much growing up/puberty is affecting Harry. So many uncharitable and cranky thoughts my dear. Poor girl. It's really going to affect a lot of things but I love that you included it because growing up is not fun. This is very realistic and I love it... Obviously

I can't believe how much I love Leo. Best character here... Other than Harry of course :)

I'm so excited! You're right- so much is happening! I just don't want it to end!

Aw, Hermione’s too sweet in this chapter, I hope she is told about the switch first.

And, Rigel is updated to a TSTL heroine. Running to the trouble - the dragon indeed.

I like your idea of fanatical Ligh wizards, because Ron seems like and the books, and even the Marauders because saying that a 11 years old Snape knows a lot about Dark Arts just a first sight is really prejudiced. The talk about there were children and teens is so-so explanation, and never forget talking aout the squib uncle they never talk about (an account or something).

Actually, Rigel could have donated the basilisk money for the clinic in the Low Alleys rather than .-
And in another note: I keep picturing the Mommy (the actor) after the artifact lol.

random question: so it's ok to have either sex partner, but what about marriage? they have to marry the other sex to have heirs?

Rigel should be letting go of her suppresant to help control her magic from time to time, She is cripplibg herself doing that, and that experiment in her mind will be nothing good. Obviously still a gryffindor in slythering cape. And why she doesnt question draco about the potions it was her duty as friend.

I prefer Leo than Rosier in any case. Rosier is more like having what he wants. Rokwoood instead look better thou is not a very detailed character. Is a pity Sellwyd already graduated she was good also,. I like that the this Harry is vulnerable but willing to defend herself , still to naive.

I love your explanations about magic and the differ from cannon Riddle. Thats the best of your story to me, also the family and how you will love and be on guard of them and their expectations. People symplified other people putting it nice labels, but people are more complicated than that and often rebels specially teenagers I think , and adults too grow up often resent of that.
Great story. I suggest you traspased to AO3 for archive :)

I keep thinking about the similarities this series has to Breaking Bad while reading this. All the intricate lies piling up on each other, while horrifying things keep happening both because of the lies and because of the power the main character has amassed. Great story telling.

Rereading the whole series and just realized that Dumbledor , probably

I think I've said beofre, but I absolutely love your stories. i hope you don't mind, but I was wondering who 'Rigel' was going to end up with, relationship-wise and also, when/if she will get caught at all. Also, I think that you've done an awesome job at making the world JK Rowling introduced so much more deep and insightful tham it already is. Maagical cores and the sort and teh lives in the Lower Alley sare so interesting to read about :)
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Hi. I really liked the monster chapter in Serpentine Subterfuge. It was so interesting and I didn’t have to press next page for ages. Thanks so much for writing even if u do it anyway

Currently rereading and I evernoticed before:
"You should put a teacher tracker in one of his shoes,"
"Go ahead," Rigel sighed.

In a way Rigel gave Draco permission to put the tracker on her xD. I actually feel better about that action now. They literally had the discussion
Love this story, thx