Reviews for The Ambiguous Artifice |
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NewGirl chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 The Weasleys are just as close a family as they are in canon, it seems. The visit was over so quickly, though! Maybe she'll visit again sometime. Bill looks like he could be an interesting guy, and even Rigel thinks he's cool! Rigel's own family really doesn't get her. Especially her father. Lily was supposed to be pretty good at potions though, so does she understand Rigel better? I'm still pissed at Leo and I don't think Rigel should have forgiven him so quickly, but at least she got an explanation out of him. How does she know he'll stay true to his word, though? If Rigel doesn't beat those these two boys all over the yard with her potions skills I'm going to scream. Loudly. What douche bags. |
Eventide Emerald chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 Great chapter. I missed Draco. |
Kyurengo chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 Just so you know, I love you! You made my day (night)! |
SlightlySociopathic chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 I made a highly embarassing noise when I saw that you had posted. This is a lovely start, I'm glad that Harry and Leo's friendship has been solidified ; he is good for her. Maybe Addy's dislike of Harry has to do with how controlled her magic is? It was said a person's leaning towards Dark or Light magic was effected by the people around them when they were young, so babies can obviously feel/react to the magic of their caretakers. So is Addy reacting adversly toward Harry's lack of magical aura? I am so happy that you updated so promptly, I needed a pick-me-up before going back to school. |
Vaughn Tyler chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 nice |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 First thought is that I notice the choppier writing, but it's not as much of a bother as it could have been. You're too good an author for that. Second is that I don't really like Leo. Sorry about that. He acts so entitled it makes me wants Harry to drop him as a friend. And then Harry just goes and accepts that he's on her side without reservations? Trust is something you have to earn back when you betray it, usually. The Weasleys seem like a great family, so warm. Harry being an ugly girl is inspiring even if it's only temporarily because of the polyjuice. Most female main characters aren't ugly. I hope she crushes Caelum and Renaldo. I can't believe Leo said that Harry "feels" that there's sexism in the potions community, when it's pretty obviously a fact. You're still as great as ever. Update soon if you can! |
gmoney480 chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 Wooo! New chapter! It was awesome, hope you update soon! Made my day so much better |
raks0 chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 OMG! the first chapter is up! you have made my shitty day shine! cannot wait for the next update :) |
J.F.C chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 Wow, it has been a while. I'm so glad to see an update of this story. Love the first chapter too. Note: It actually felt a bit weird reading such a short chapter, you have gotten me so used to the longer ones that the current chapter got me by surprised. Either way I don't mind, I hope the shorter chapter will mean more frequent updates. ;) |
Midnight Alwas chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 OMG :O you just made my day, no my week by updating. THANK YOU SO MUCH I haven't read this yet but I'm sure it'll be amazing anyway thanks for updating I'm so excited :) |