|Reviews for Instead of You|
| Nova Dragnell chapter 3 . 3/6
Ooooooooooooooo vampire natsu comin in your house stealin you're blood
| realisticFantasy chapter 3 . 2/23
Dun dun duuuuun!
I'm actually sirprised that Natsu can still use his fire magic. Aren't vampires weak to that? I'm glad he isn't though, that would just crush him. And that is SOOO something Juvia would do. Nice! Great job, and i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
I love the story! Please update it!
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/11
please update as soon as you can. good so far!
P.S. plz have gray try to attack juvia in human form. thnx!
| PandaGirl chapter 3 . 2/10
I feel bad for saying this but I absolutely lost it when I read "Juvia, get out of there!" XD it was just so funny! This story is seriously one of the most original I have ever read. The fact that its really well-written is a plus too! Please update soon!
| SnowDragonSlayerTasha chapter 3 . 2/10
this is a really good story XD
| Darkwarrior1010 chapter 3 . 2/10
The beginning and ending were perfect, don't worry. I wonder if he really did sneak in or not. This is really good and I story I haven't really seen around which makes me happy! All of these other story ideas are driving me insane because they are all REPEATS in a way.
My favorite part was where they started showing their beastial sides, but I like dark stuff so of course I like those kinds of parts lol.
There are a few typos but I forgot where they are at sorry, I think there are no errors otherwise.
Please keep going and update soon!
| GammaDancer chapter 2 . 1/29
I like it, but I was thinking Gajeel as more of a fae than zombie after-all he does like to dress up. Keep it up. I looking forward to the next chappy.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
Sounds really cool. I like where this story is going. Can't wait for the next chapter XxX
| Whitehorse102 chapter 1 . 1/25
AMAZING PLEASE YOU MUST CONTINUE OMG OMG OMG AHHHHHHH 5 1/2 STARS AHHHHHHHH
| Doraguniru chapter 1 . 1/21
RED EYES !
| Lioness Of the fire chapter 1 . 1/21
it seems like a interesting plot ,i hope you can go on seems cool
hope our boys can find a way to live and cure perhaps
| SnowDragonSlayerTasha chapter 1 . 1/21
omg best first chapter ever! XD I loved it so much I always loved Werewolves and Zombies and Vampires as long as Natsu was the vampire so this is my FAV KIND OF STORY!
| NatsuDragneelOfFairytail chapter 1 . 1/21
I love it so much and I hope its a long lasting series as good as this chapter! :D