Reviews for Instead of You
Guest chapter 6 . 5/1
I really like this story and can't wait for you to update again. Are we going to see more of the other couples or i this solely NaLu centric?
Slivermist chapter 6 . 4/30
New chapter! Please
hunsworth chapter 6 . 3/29
hurry im dying
please i need to know what happens next!
Guest chapter 6 . 3/14
you should make the orb where if any sick people touch it then it disappears and heals them that's why the grandmother wants it so bad so she can be healed
Silvermist chapter 6 . 3/3
Is it done yet I just can't wait!
Silvermist chapter 6 . 3/1
I was thinking why not let that girl that infected Natus,Gajeel, and Gray pop up in the mission and things take a turn for the worse as they three little children from getting infected with the disease as lucy,levy, and Julia turn into fox demon,snow woman, and ghost for the chapter! I hope this will help you with your writing and please keep submitting chapters as fast as possible so till next time goodbye
Silvermist chapter 6 . 2/28
Please hurry with the next chapter me and my friends can't wait!
Yuki Loxar chapter 6 . 1/28
Hi! This is my first time reading this story in a while. I like where it's going but I only have a tiny problem. In the summary it says that it has minor gale and gruvia but it seems that Gajeel has more 'screentime' than Gray. It's nothing major irks me a little. Also congrats on the 1 year anniversary! ((Y'know I'd expect more chapters from a story that's been going on for a year, no offense)). At any rate, I'll be following this story so I await your next update! (Hey that rhymed!)
VampyrSarah chapter 6 . 1/5
Yay! New chapter! I freaked out when I saw the notification! And I got cyber cookie! Yay! I like the feel Im getting so far, awesome work. Cant wait for the next chapter!

PS No clue why, mightve been the mention of Vampire Diaries (epic show, Damon!) But I started thinking of Klaus with Shale for a bit. Hehe!
Kisa7221 chapter 5 . 12/6/2014
VampyrSarah chapter 5 . 7/27/2014
What's wrong with Natsu:
Vampires, while sometimes known to form clans and covens, are commonly solitary creature who interact to feed, find a mate, or cause trouble from pure boredom. The vampiric instincts are subconsciously telling Natsu to start cutting off ties through his caringness. Vampires also sometimes have heightened emotions hence the intense depression.
PS. As my username my suggest I am indeed a vampire nerd. 15 now and have loved them since I was 4!
PPS. Yay! New chapter! It was great! I did a little fan sqee when i saw the notification in my email. Great work!
guest chapter 5 . 7/25/2014
Go lucy! Bring some hope back in the room!
Natachan13 chapter 5 . 7/25/2014
OMG 3, thank you, i can't wait for the next chapter :p
Darkwarrior1010 chapter 5 . 7/25/2014
I don't know what's wrong with Natsu... And I'm a little afraid to guess. Does he blame himself for Lucy's sadness or is his vampirism getting to him?

I am loving this story! It's so sad and cute and gives me all sorts of feels. I love how you do the interaction, it seems very realistic and the dialogue is nicely done as well. The story touches me really deeply and you can feel the powerlessness of Natsu and the awkwardness of Lucy just pouring out of the page.

I particularly like the part about Natsu's thoughts being clouded, it makes me wonder where everything will lead and if he ends up leaving the guild. I really love this story being updated! And I hope that you update when you are ready (although, if you can put this story on priority I wouldn't mind that. Hehe) Please keep writing and know
IceMageNinjaTalia chapter 5 . 7/25/2014
nah he could've be like a mahogany colored wolf which is a darker shade of red but looks brown as well. I could see Gajeel as a werewolf better though cause out of all the guys he has the most hair on his back XD for me Natsu being a Vampire is cool cause that's how i'll only Love vampires and that may sound hypocritical but it's true
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