Reviews for it's the law (and it wasn't made to be broken)
Edna cloud chapter 1 . 3/22
Loved this. Well done. Xxx
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 3/19
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Sharon T chapter 1 . 2/22
Love
sat1 chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
So cute !
readingaccount chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
So fabulous!
Shadows Concealed In Darkness chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
This was a great story! It was a really interesting AU! (Lol, 'Everyone get out. John and I are having sex. Long sex.' XD Oh, I loved Lestrade's reaction.)
x-EmilyTennant-x chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
I was so uncertain about reading this at first because of how young Sherlock was. It made me a bit uncomfortable at first, to be honest. But the more I read, the more I realised what you'd done. It wasn't just some random fifteen year old. It was a guy who had been through a hell of a lot more in fifteen years than some people ever experience in their whole life. Add that to his intellect, plus his ability to cope and survive on his own (even if he wasn't exactly healthy) made me realise it wasn't just a kid.

The way you wrote this was so clever and really covered so much of the personalities and their stories in such a short period. Not many writers can do that. I was expecting to be really squicked and creeped out by this, but my curiosity got the better of me and I'm grateful for that because I was proved wrong. You did this really well! Added to favourites.
RosesAreForever23 chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Love, love, love! I honestly think that there is a number of times large enough for me to say love for anyone to understand just how much I enjoyed reading this fic
librarywitch chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
It is not hard to accept that Sherlock, young though he is, is so much safer with John than living on the streets. Well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
great story
Nikki of FunLife chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Oh... My God... SOOOOOOOOOOOO SEXY!

I really loved this work!

Its written well and kept me interested!
UsagiLovesDuochan chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Wow, that was a nice plotbunny you were offered there. I loved this story. I think you did especially well in showing us a John and Sherlock that you can definitely recognise as the the ones of the series, yet we also get to know the young part, the teenage/young adult part. They are not all there yet to how they act when they are older. Sherlock obviously still allows sentiment and his meeting with John cetainly allows him to never lose it in the near future.

Oh and I loved that scene of Sherlock's birthday where he throws all the guests out, telling them bluntly that he wants to have sex with John. This was so very typical Sherlock. Had me rolling on the floor with laughter.

I have only one thing to point out. One of the sentences near the end sounds a bit strange:

"... ; neither of them is going to very last at this rate..."

I am not sure if that is just a way of saying I am not aware of or if it would be better if you had written: "...; neither of them ist going to last very long at this rate..." something like that. Other than that, I have nothing to point out.

Story has been added to my favourites, simple as that. :)

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /_\
Samzi chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Wonderfully written. I like the idea of Sherlock following John home.

Someone said that once(pondering)

Really enjoyed it.
sentarla chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Liked the story. Thanks
MzMalfoy chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Wow, very compelling. Sixteen is young and it made me slightly uncomfortable, but I enjoyed the story for sure. Well done. :)
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