The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all elements related to the reader like "(your name)" and replace them with a canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed such as Archive Of Our Own.

*Fangirls too hard and falls out of chair* SQUEEE! Dave~SENPAI! Okay, I need to calm down. Thank you so much for writing this oh my goodness I adored it! 3

I'm so excited and happy my friend Rebecca recommended you to me! This is so fantastic so far! 3

Awwwwwwwww

Dats all I have to say

you did an excellent job at this! sometimes i wish fictional characters were real.

Awesome job! I love it! Keep writing! :D

OMFG! im so happy, its like my birthday present, another chapter of this awesome fanfic! (it was my birthday the day before u posted this :P)

The funny thing about this whole situation is that it is entirely feasible as I have the second most common female name in the US.

Please continue!

This fanfic does not seem rushed at all and is funny as hell. Keep writing it! It's really interesting and i like how you portray each character,especially Dave! I would love to see how it would turn out on the date. I'm pretty sure it would be hilarious, due to the fact that you have a great sense of humor after all :D

I really like this :33 Hope to see an update soon ::3333

keepa going.
I took me forever to finish a 16 chappie fanfic, but i did it! And you can too! plus its summer, so school shouldn't be as bad unless you are doing exams right now...if so...*shudders* I'm praying for you...

Please finish this. I love that the mom does care, even if she's drunk a lot

nuuu please continue, twas pretty good

i think u should fucking continue :)