i love this story. i think this chapter is my favorite because of how cutely dave told the character that he loved her. eeeeeeeee. so adorable. anyway, loved it. hope you write more.

who cares? sometimes we need a good ol' cliché chapter heh and i thought the "shut up and go make me a sandwich" is pretty funny too hahah good job :3

pwes cawy on :3

Continue please

you did well, no need to beat yourself down, you did good and i like it, im not sure if anyone else does but yeah

this is illegal, adorable fanfics are illegal now, we're going to give you two choices, one is to continue writing, or two, we're gunna take this down, but i speak on behalf of everyone and say that you should continue for the greater good

so far so good yeah