Reviews for Compassion Holding its Breath
Spawn chapter 9 . 6/2
Just popping in to say how much I love this story and hope that you continue it.
Chris chapter 1 . 5/23
Oh, I want to read more! Looking forward t meeting Lauren again!
jmrbear chapter 7 . 5/22
I love this story so much. I thought your character development was great. I hope you come back and write more someday.
missylb chapter 9 . 5/2
Update? Or has this been abandoned?
Spawn chapter 9 . 4/21
I love this story and hope that you continue it, if you have the time.
soapdemon34 chapter 9 . 3/29
I just found this story and I have to tell you how magnificent it is. The banter is witty, realistic, and fun. You gave the characters depth and meaning. Esme is my favorite character and you wrote her beautifully, making me love her even more.

My heart broke for Bella and all that she has gone though; her crazy mother, apathetic piece of shit father, bullying classmates, and loneliness. Her entire life was fill with misery and she had no one but herself to rely on, yet she managed to survive it. I'm glad that she has the Cullens now. I can wait to see the bond between her and Esme develop into the mother-daughter relationship that they both so desperately desire.

I was in awe of the strength you gave Esme. She loves her family above all else, and for her ask Rosalie to leave, even though it was killing her to do so in order to do what was best for everyone, was heart wrenching. Alice is a riot and Jasper was so sweet and protective in accepting Bella into their family.

I felt bad for Emmett being torn between the family he loves and his mate. Rosalie is emotionally a disaster and had no right to treat Edward and the rest of the family as her personal punching bag. She needs to deal with her issues or she truly will have no one and nothing.

I know I'm late to the party, but I do hope that your muse returns and you continue this story, because it is fantastic. Thanks for sharing.
vachonrobyn chapter 9 . 3/18
Please, oh please! Don't leave me here, you are such a gifted, amazing writer, please complete! Love this!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/7
GUEST chapter 4 . 3/6
Wow-truly well written. Your intelligence shown thru beautifully. I hope that a some point that you are able to complete this story. It would be great to see where you take this.

MayaDelRey chapter 9 . 2/18
Best story by far.I loved all the connections and ties and even the drama.I can't wait for an update.I love the way everything was written.
mjenney21 chapter 9 . 2/4
I love reading this, it was really interesting to me how you've taken the characters and adapted and expanded them, it was very enjoyable to read. It didn't exactly feel like a story, more a very in depth emotions and feelings. But still I really really really enjoyed this story, love the way you write xxx
CindyWindy1 chapter 9 . 1/7
I've really been missing this story. Hope all is well with you!
Priscilla chapter 9 . 12/26/2014
Very good adult version of Twilight. The characters are much more interesting with an impressive new depth. The social and psychological aspects of the family dynamics are more transparent and I really hope you find the time to write more.
Happy new year.
62442padfoot chapter 9 . 12/13/2014
What happened to 'two weeks'!? I hope everything is OK. I hope it's just writers block that's delaying you. I would certainly not protest to the continuation of this wonderfully amazing story! The way you delve into the characters real problems...gah it's absolutely amazing. They're all so substantial (even shallow Rosalie has more layers than the original character) I love the story and your writing stype. I hope everything is going well and (should you find it right) you continue.

Crystal Blue chapter 9 . 12/5/2014
OMG! This is good! I hope you'll find time to write again. The characters have so much more depth, I love it.
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