Reviews for The Scarlet Cloak
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 16 . 3/11/2018
wow I just found this storyline I love it! I soo hope she hasent taken off (ok maybe I do that would give the boys a reason to go after her :-) cant wait to see what you have comming next
miller330 chapter 14 . 12/8/2014
Yay, someone finally knows about them. Cant wait to see kill and her interacting at the dinner, I need to see some tension and sweetness...
BlackTiger6 chapter 12 . 7/10/2014
This is amazing! Update soon! :A
Bluu6293 chapter 12 . 6/6/2014
awesome chapter! Update soon
HuntressofHope chapter 12 . 6/6/2014
Clianna! NO! Oh god, poor Kili!
miller330 chapter 12 . 6/5/2014
so excited for the next one...
Promise1982 chapter 12 . 6/5/2014
Great chapter
Cant wait for next one!
Promise1982 chapter 10 . 6/2/2014
continue soon this is very good.
The Cynical Nerd chapter 9 . 4/25/2014
This has been wonderful so far. Very few authors can have an established relationship between characters and not botch it.

I'm still thinking if I can write something for this, but hopefully I will. I'd like to try my hand at it :P

Sincerely, nickiR0x
MidnightTales357 chapter 10 . 4/14/2014
Great story .I loved up the good work and update please check out my story .It's called hobbit a truly unexpected journey (you would make two total ringers very happy). So read and review.
A fellow ringer
Guest chapter 12 . 4/9/2014
Aw thanks for the shout out :) I was glad to be of help and I look forward to helping out when needed in the future :) happy writing!
xxMockingbirdxxx chapter 12 . 4/9/2014
um. in the slot that is supposed to say site name: it's blank
miller330 chapter 11 . 3/31/2014
Ah, the website didnt come through! Though do enjoy your break, and im looking forward to new chapters!
AnastasiaK chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
Just wanted to say that I like it so far but I would suggest getting a beta. There are a few mistakes, nothing major... just distracting.

"... revealing non-other than a laughed... Kili." I'm sure you meant "a laughing Kili"
"... sharing her recently backed pie" - Baked
It's not "Kili Oakenshield," it's not a last name. He is simply Kili, son of Dis. Oakenshield is a name/title earned by Thorin.

Little things.

Keep it up, I look forward to the next chapter.
Lilliandil107 chapter 3 . 3/24/2014
I'm really enjoying the story right now and the story of clianas birth was hilarious! Did you make that up or was it a previous experience? Nice job with the story :)
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