|Reviews for If The City Never Sleeps (Then That Makes Two)|
| Whovianeverlark17 chapter 1 . 3/16
Just reread this again ... it's so sweet and adorable, and the love that grows between then is just so amazing and well-written, and just... ugh. #relationshipgoals I love this story.
| Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 35 . 3/4
This was just so beautiful and heartwarming and lovely and just the kind of fluff and love story I needed. This was a very unique idea and you fleshed everything out so wonderfully and perfectly that I wish that I could just weave the sort of gentle love that you had portrayed between Everlark in every line of your story into my own stories. Even the parts that weren’t explicitly romantic, the entire story, exuded an air of a gentle, but powerful and all consuming love. Like waves bobbing gently as they carry you forever, or something. I don’t know. But I felt it. And it was amazing.
Continue writing, and if you publish anything, let me know.
This was beautiful, and now I’m off to read more of your works.
Epic Otaku Cherry
| Lovelytothebone chapter 35 . 12/30/2017
This was an interesting story. I didn't think I'd enjoy it but it actually made me think alot about the process of falling in love. Very sweet too.
| ollie Ray chapter 3 . 8/25/2017
wow this fanfic is very interesting compared to other ones I've read.
| BlueKarou79 chapter 35 . 3/18/2017
So, so sweet! Great job! Thank you for sharing it with us.
I would mark your story as complete though, even if you are going to do one shots. I almost didn't read it cause it looked like it had been abandoned for years. And your title could use some work (sorry).
| Almond501 chapter 35 . 1/30/2017
Omg this has me crying it is so sweet and ::sigh::. I can't wait for the one shots. Thank you for finishing this story arch. I love it!
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/17/2016
Their playfulness in this chapter reached a new level of sweet. It's so nice to see them becoming more and more comfortable with one another.
| professional9100 chapter 35 . 5/15/2016
I didn't see that this was completed on here and not on AO3 until recently so I was literally crying when I found out there was more, let alone that it was completed! Can I say thank you? This was amazing reading all over again, plus the extra chapters I missed. I'm so happy this isn't the last we'll see of this universe :) good luck for any future stories and again, THANK YOU. I fell more in love with your character's Peeta by the way ;)
| emily chapter 35 . 5/4/2016
this was amazing! i loved how the natural progression of their relationship followed the order of events in the book. excellent job
| Anti-Kryptonite chapter 35 . 3/10/2016
This is brilliant! My cheeks hurt several times throughout reading this story, and only when I felt it did I realize that I was grinning all the way through! It was such a delight and pleasure to read, from beginning to end - thank you for writing and sharing it!
| RICKRIODANMK2 chapter 35 . 1/15/2016
wow - that was really really really good. Very strong concept and flawless execution. Loved the strong characterisation and ending
| KatnissHermioneCullen chapter 35 . 11/8/2015
Oh my God, I loved this fic so much! I loved how you ended it with an epilogue with them toasting. I'm literally about to cry because it's over. I can always reread it. . .but it's just not the same as reading something for the first time. I hardly ever get this feeling over fics, usually only books and really good movies and TV series. This was truly amazing.
| KatnissHermioneCullen chapter 34 . 11/8/2015
I loved this so much. It was seriously the best Hunger Games story that I have ever read, almost better than the books. Thank you so much for writing this. Really, it was amazing. I can't wait to read the epilogue as soon as I finish writing this review, lol. Wonderful job.
I loved reading as they slowly grew together, gaining more and more trust for each other with each passing day. Katniss learning that he wasn't the horrible man that she expected and Peeta learning that Katniss wasn't as breakable as he imaged. Them both finding the love they needed in each other. This is definitely a story that I will reread many times.
| KatnissHermioneCullen chapter 26 . 11/8/2015
Great chapter, loved the ending.
| KatnissHermioneCullen chapter 21 . 11/6/2015
Finally Peeta knows that her father died. Wonderful chapter!