Reviews for Son of the Western Sea |
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AbyssalDaemon chapter 1 . 2/16/2014 This is just amazing. You've done a incredible job at both writing Percy, and even more-so with the Olympians who are commonly badly written in fanfiction. Is this going to switch back and fore-forth from the past to present showing Percy's adventures? |
The Dark Eccentric chapter 1 . 2/9/2014 Sounds like a very interesting story. I've always loved mythology, which is why I read Percy Jackson and the Olympians. So finding a story based on that which branches into other mythologies sounds great. Especially since Greek is the one I know most about so this will be an opportunity to learn more about the others. Don't fail me now! Heh, but really. Great story and your writing is excellent. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2014 One thing that you get really, really right in this fanfic (and in your others as well) is compelling characterization that feels like canon. Seriously, that haiku was perfect. Looking forward to reading how everyone has changed while the Western gods were sleeping, as well as how the other pantheons will react/take advantage of the new war. And I'm really curious as to how many different gods/goddesses Percy has befriended/alienated while going around being an irreverent, invincible hero. |
code R.R chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 I truly think this is a amazing concept but the only thing that makes me cringe is the multiple/ a lot relationship thing. I really can't see Percy doing that. His loyalty wouldn't allow it, I'll continue to read it but I just have a hard time swallowing the paring or the. . . . weirdness of it to put it bluntly |
Zamis chapter 1 . 1/24/2014 Hmmm, I like the story so far. The only thing that irks me is te idea of him taking many different lovers. He has always seemed like te kind of person who would have lot of opportunity for lovers. But would in the end choose one and stay with them. |
TheWick chapter 1 . 1/22/2014 Amazing story you have here! I really like the idea of a Hero of Olympus that didn't happen right after The Last Olympian... Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see how this story progresses! |
jackie-chan1230 chapter 1 . 1/22/2014 I like the plot for this story and can't wait to read more! :D hope you update soon! |
Raceman1234 chapter 1 . 1/22/2014 I love the story please update soon |
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 1 . 1/22/2014 Interesting start, I really like this concept. One thing I'd like to mention is truly fantastic author named Kylie Chan, she's published a truly epic fantasy series that's based around the Taoist Parthenon, set in modern times. The series is broken into tree trilogies called 'Dark Heavens,' 'Journey to Wudang' and 'Celestial Battle.' I really recommend you check them out. |
DhampyrX2 chapter 1 . 1/22/2014 Why do I get get the feeling that the "diplomatic solution" involved between Ryujin and Poseidon will involve Percy and the Japanese pantheon wanting him for themselves, by marriage or adoption? Also it's pretty hypocritical for Apollo to act like it's some kind of betrayal that Percy is getting some from anyone given how many kids he has. I'd love to see how Percy interacted with the Morrigan, or the Norse pantheon for that matter. I look forward to the nest few chapters of this as they should be very interesting. |
ak massy chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 This start was a pleasure to read. Wanderlust just feels right for Percy; The conflict between Gods and demigods looks interesting; and having a sort of godly geopolitics just seems fun. I look forward to seeing how you expand this. |
deltawaves chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 A very intresting story, I am anticipant to see where it goes. If it is anything like your bleach fic then chances are i will be pleased. Good luck, and happy wrighting |
general zargon chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 I'm...not entirely sure how I feel about this story. O.o It sounds really interesting, but I'll have to wait a few more chapters before I decide whether I like it or not. I hope that the next chapter go into what happened with Percy and how he wound up becoming Amaterasu's lover when she hates the West - not to mention that prophecy that Rachel gave him. I wonder if Percy will also be getting together with an Irish deity, too? While I'm sad that this story won't be Percabeth, if it is more about the journey than romance (aside from Percy trying to set a record for most gods and goddesses from different pantheons taken as lovers), I find myself hoping that there is going to be some humor about that. I wonder what happens with Blackjack? Here's to hoping that that Pegasus gets to shine in his round-the-world trips. :) |
Fangking2 chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 I like it alot. Did he meet the Norse or the Celtics yet? |
Lord of the Disc chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 Very interesting start. I like the idea of Percy sailing around the world, interacting with various mythological figures and generally getting into trouble. Looking forward to future chapters. |