|Reviews for This Cruel Yet Beautiful World|
| Rose Rain 7 chapter 1 . 3/6
(I'm going to go and check it out," he said and rested a hand on his hip, "Might as well, since I'm not sure where the hell we are, and if we happen to find some way out this forest, maybe we can find someone who can direct us to where Konoha is.)
Don't do it Sasuke... You are going to pee your pants! I would to see you frighten though.
( Hinata's face grew a bright red and she bit her lip. She was actually going to ride on Naruto's back? She shyly drew forward after a moment of hesitation and got on Naruto's back, hurting her ankle on the way.)
Now that I think about it... Why didn't Hinata use her Byakugan? She could have seen it.
(Naruto still held Hinata, who was using her byakugan to scope out the landscape around them.)
... Spoke too soon xD
("Sssh!" Sakura shushed him sharply, but it was too late.)
Of course Naruto had to be the idiot who gave away their position xD
Levi! My love good to see you :3
('I think he's even shorter then Sakura,' Naruto thought to himself in amusement before the man finally was able to get to them,)
Lol that is a blow to his pride if he had one.
(but I'll show you my main technique!" he did a handsign, and soon a clone appeared next to him.
Levi's eyes widened a fraction upon seeing a carbon copy of the blond standing next to him. The real Naruto held out his hand and the clone began to form his rasengan.)
I know you said by a fraction but... XD I imagined it as big as a plate lol. It was hilarious.
Finished reading the story and I have to say there is a flaw as a reader I'm not liking in your story. This fanfiction gives off a bias aura when I was reading.. Is it just me or is there a lot of Karin and Sasuke interaction (moments too) to the point it overshadows some characters? From reading this I immediatly concluded that you are a SasukeXKarin fan and if I as a reader knew this then you should know that it must have been too obvious that even I started to feel it. The lack of Sakura and Hinata screen time(or whatever you are going to call it) came out annoying. I think you should consider giving a fair amount of writing to each of them than just those 2. If a reader came and saw their favorite character in this then they will definitely click to read but if their favorite character barely got any screen time than expect them to drop the story. I don't think anyone wants that not even me / if you are having trouble putting them in character or not sure where to place them than just leave them out (meaning write about Sasuke, Karin and Naruto. Leave Hinata and Sakura out of your story.) Either get them out or fix this problem.
I'm actually quite scared you might view me as a flamer :(
| V chapter 4 . 3/3
| Eren Jaege chapter 4 . 3/3
When will they start killing Titans already?
| honhoi chapter 1 . 2/18
hello! i just wanted to make a comment on your use of "levi rivialle"
in the manga and anime he is just levi. i suspect that his name is romanized as rivalle because of
1) when the japanese voice-overs try to say his name, it comes out as "rebai" (because if you said rivialle in english it would be "ree-val")
2) levi seems french, so many people are inclined to spell his name in that way
3) mistranslation (his romanized name from japanese is (リヴァイ phonetically this is Rivai so people feel inclined to add extra letters to his name
but any who-i just wanted to point out that "rivaille" is a mistranslation. and to say levi rivalle is almost like saying his name twice (very redundant) when his last name was not revealed in the manga/anime (neither is "heichou" his last name. that simply means captain.)
other than that i like this story :]
| phoenixyfriend chapter 4 . 2/16
I remember this story... I was surprised to see it again. Are you still having the same troubles with reviewers as before?
And I do quite enjoy this story. It even has Karin in it, and in a benign way, at that!
| TheMagicManWithThePlan chapter 4 . 2/13
I love it!
| nopearltea chapter 4 . 2/11
Love this story it got me hooked immediately! Sasuke is pretty much the main reason why Im reading this. Not much or any Sasuke x shingeki no kyojin atm. Not much Ichigo x Shingeki x kyojin either, sad (. Love Sasukes attitude its pretty accurate. I know hella ppl hate him atm but hes still pretty beast and he has an opportunity to redeem himself in this world. Kinda knew Petra would be the first one fallin for him lol. Im cool with Sasuke x Petra, but is he gonna meet the other chicks? (Mikasa, Annie, Christa, Hitch, Sasha etc) Cant wait to see the shinobis assist in eliminating the recon corp's predicament. Also hope they get involved with the whole human titan conspiracy. Looking foward to the next chapter and dont keep me waiting too long!
| mei101 chapter 4 . 2/5
please update! TTTT
| Ellistriel chapter 4 . 2/4
I'm so glad I found this, I Thought that you gave up on this fic.
Hinata cut her hair? that’s horrible, such a pretty hair… for something that probably don't give her much (Since they jump naturally high distances and can use chakra to walk on walls and even some speed, I guess that it will only serve for propulsion. But they don’t really know that xD) I'm glad to see that Karin didn't just go with what the other girls told her to do.
Naruto is the sweetest person around and the loudest xD People starring at Hinata is really natural, maybe if Naruto wasn't whit her she could have pass without many people noticing her eyes but the boy draw to much attention to them xD
Now they're going to see them in action. Sasuke and Naruto will sure be scary for them… and Sakura if she start punching titans. Hinata's byakugan and Karin sensor abilities will be something really interesting and Sakura's healing… if they need it xD Will they be able to summon? or they are not gong to go that far yet? xD
I adore Erwin, it's nice to see him around the fic.
Update soon please
| MayanMoonFlower chapter 4 . 2/2
This is a great story! Please please do continue! I just loved reading this! I love Karin and Sasuke interactions and Naruto being friendly like always Hinata cute as alwsys and sakura i wanna see her training! Oh and Levi! But i have a question if you dont mind answering will there be a couple here? Or will it be all action?
| XKhaosXKyuubiX chapter 4 . 2/1
I like this. I especially love the interactions between the Konoha Ninja. Very nicely written. I can't wait for them to meet Eren and the others in training. I bet Sasuke and Mikasa form a really weird friendship.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/29
Good chap! Stay classy
| greymouser chapter 4 . 1/28
thanks for the new chapter! looking forwsrd to see Sasukd kivk some Titan. :-)
| pdeneroff3204 chapter 4 . 1/28
Sounds like an interesting story. Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Ghostly Guest chapter 3 . 1/26
Very good and interesting. The writing seemed very fluid and the overall story is put together well. Looking forward to more chapters keep the lovely work.