|Reviews for Love Hurts (Like a Cantaloupe to the Prefrontal Cortex)|
| guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
aww! this is cute! natalie has a strong voice/pov/presence!
| aligal528 chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
I think this is an interesting perspective to the "cult" storyline that was never really explored before. I'm intrigued by your main character and the secondary characters you added to give a background. I do have a question:
You wrote that Kim was the baby of six children, and the only girl. A few sentences later two sisters, Laura and Rory are mentioned. I was just wondering if you could clarify which is true.