Reviews for Leaving It All Behind
UnderminetheAuthority chapter 2 . 2/22/2014
This is a great story, still loving the imagery. Usually I don't quite like characters I can't identify-is Kold an oc?-but he had depth by the end of the short area he came in
chaosrin chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Looks fine.
Do keep adding details of the setting and getting Jinx to interact with people as to show how things have change or not change, like people talking about titans on News, papers so on.
Do update
H. Kenway chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
So far i like it, It is well written and I also like your attention to detail, anyway i got a good fist impression and im looking forward on reading more.
H. Kenway chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
So far i like it, good introduction, it seems to have a bit more... i dont know... i gues you could call it a believable approach. Looking forward for your next update.
UnderminetheAuthority chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
This is a very interesting story. I love how you expanded on little details to build an atmosphere. The small bits of imagery you add in just the right places help the city to come alive, unlike many other stories I read and find no picture for the setting