|Reviews for we found each other in the dark|
| Pharies chapter 1 . 9/27/2018
Definitely captured what could have been for those two. Good job!
| iloverob32 chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
What a fantastic story! so light and playful. Loved it!
| gapeach27 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
OMG! I LOVED IT! I KNOW IT WAS A ONE SHOT BUT WELL WORTH IT. I WRITE ON HERE A WELL. I HAVE BEEN THINKING OF A REIGN STORY MYSELF...OR SHOULD I SAY A BASH STORY. ANYWAYS WELL DONE, WELL WRITTEN, AMAZING DETAIL. WONDERFUL.
| Joan89 chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
Ohhh so sweet
| avaatquevale2250 chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
I just died of Mash happiness and went to heaven.
| Sarah chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
That. Was. Amazing.
So often, these types of fics are so poorly done, but this was fantastic! Who knew a sex scene could be done in such a classy way. I applaud you my friend...well done.
Please feel free to write as many of these as you wish. Actually, I beg you, please write more! :-)
| flor chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
OHMYGODDDDDD I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! Its been so long I read something this good. This was soo perfect! It was cute and fluffy but at the same time it was so sexy and smutty plus some laughter it was just amazing. I love this couple in the show and thank you for writing this. I'm so glad to be part of this fandom and otp! Please write some more maryXBash!
| wintercandy chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
I actually loved this! My first smutt fic. haha
| nl7 chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Everything about this was perfection!
| iheartfillintheblank chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
That was sweet. I like this a lot. Great job
| chrisrose chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Your friend is very wise. ;) This episode kinda broke my heart so I was hoping some alternate fanfic versions would appear. This is perfect, not only because of the wish-fulfillment aspect of Mash not being interrupted at the inn and dragged back to the palace - and my hope that in your version they do get away and stay together - but because you progressed their emotional bond and Mary's awareness of what Bash means to her. Although she showed some concern for him in the actual episode, she was still too attached to Francis for my liking. I feel like she's more over him, here, and more committed to Bash - although not unrealistically so - no declarations of love yet but that's okay. Actions speak louder than words anyway. :) Hope you write more!
| Bashful Masher chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Well thank you for improving a scene that was all too short and unsatisfying in the show! Great characterization, no really, that's what makes it makes the fic truly enjoyable to read and not just sex-that-could-be-had-by-anyone-and-who-cares? I love how this was REAL and raw and messy and clumsy and full of laughter and tearful awe and everything I think makes Mary/Bash more of a Real Love... not a fairytale illusion of love like Mary/Francis.
"Not necessarily better. Just...different. He was gentler, and he touched her with something akin to reverence."
Mary! That IS better! Being loved & worshipped by Bash...so much better than Francis!
"taking away something you thought you wanted and giving you something else in return. Something you never thought was meant for you. Something you never dreamed you'd be worthy of having."
Well, thank goodness she realized that after all. :) I find it sad that Mary couldn't actually tell Bash she loved him at the end, even though she was thinking all these loving thoughts before...but hopefully she'll tell him someday, even if he doesn't expect her to. Especially because he doesn't expect her to. :)
| Marie Meyers chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Oh my gosh. OH MY GOSH. This was so amazing. The third to last paragraph was wonderful. All of it was wonderful. Oh my goodness. This was amazing! I think..I think you should make another one shot, in the same fashion...about when Bash found out Mary's plan, or something. Oh gosh. I'm riveted. Marry me, please. Then write me stories forever.