Reviews for Becoming Lífþrasir |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve not read the sequel yet so posting on this chapter is purely “proof” that I’ve finally finished reading this story and can move onto the next be it I can handle the emotions in it. I’ll be reading that one a bit later (pfft a bit) because I can tell I need a break to actually process the story before reading another or the sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just came back to say this was a god damn master piece |
![]() ![]() Wet stomach gunpowder wet gunpowder Wet gunpowder ignition source no explosion |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I have to say itastrid” a stupid name? So a plant calls “god’s beauty” stupid? Oh dear |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh come on another fanfic depicting astrid as overly cruel .. i heard only good about this one so i have high hopes that the development will satisfy me. My jaw simply dropped when the next part about stoik was added I was likehm this doesn’t quite feel like Astrid” but i understand her little “problem” i tend to say a lot of shi to during those days haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanna say that I'm sorry if my question about AO3 was pushy before. I have read in your notes that ppl demand stuff from you, and I wasn't thinking when I wrote that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If his son gave him a later, like Stoick had never given his son in years gone by, this time he would be a proper father and take it with both hands. I just really really love this line. It's so poetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, the sheer amount of plot development in this chapter is INSANE love it of course! And holy sh1t I could not tear my eyes away when Snotlout was dragging Astrid, that scene was INTENSE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "She was too young, too naive, and she was not worthy to take his smart Hiccup's place." I just wanna go all "oh honey, no. Honey, nonono." on Stoick |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, it's really painful to read how much Hiccup's HeRiTaGe actually blinds Stoick. *facepalm* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad Gobber knoooooows |
![]() ![]() ![]() I took a couple days off this fic, bc I went and took a look at the other fic you recommended, "When in Rome"... And then I got stuck there. Thank you for that rec, that fic was AMAZING. Seriously so incredible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love love LOVE this story! Any chance you might post on AO3 in the future? (I think I saw a 3rd book in the works) the ads on this platform are a bit much. But I don't mean to be a choosing beggar! Anywhere is fine, as long as I get to read your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have made this fellow cry bro. I love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amen! Screw romance! Hiccup and Stoick moments are the best! I wrote this well. Very satisfying and pleasing. Loved loved loved it |