Reviews for Alpha and Omega Book 2: The Fallen
PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 9 . 2/21
I take it that you have no plans on following the example of Pacific Rim and have the EVA-01 upgraded in the aspect where Shinji-2 will have Rei for his Co-Pilot while inside the EVA, huh?

Shinji-1's 'Harmonic Resonance' seemed almost Telepathic in nature.
I was almost expecting that you would have made the process be performed through physical contact in a manner where it was like a mixture between Psychometry and Technopathy.
PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 6 . 2/18
Part of me was kind of expecting Risuko to go 'Arbitrary Skepticist' on them in regards to Telekinesis.
PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 5 . 2/17
I would not have minded "seeing" Shinji-2 and perhaps even Asuka, Rei, Ritsuko, and Misato be, one-by-one, going through the Mind Meld process by the courtesy of Aria, allowing them to experience Shinji-1's memories of the timeline he came from.

Oh, and FemDom is neither amusing nor is it True Feminism.
soggy noodle chapter 3 . 1/15
Well, that happened.

You really know how to write tension and action, I'll give you that.

Though, I am curious as to why Shinji chose thermal rounds if he knew it would make the pistol overheat more frequently - wasn't his go-to option in the last book cryo rounds?

I mean, if you're trying to nerf him by basically giving him limited ammo, I get it... I don't like it, but I get it, but an explanation (internal monologue of his rationale) would've been nice.
Alex chapter 16 . 1/11
Brilliant fanfiction you've made here. Lots of fun. :)
ThePhenakism chapter 16 . 11/12/2017
Absolutely amazing stories ! Finished book 1 and couldn’t stop reading, I wish you had continued writing this but it looks like It’s stopped getting updates :(
Biblio388 chapter 16 . 8/24/2017
Lots of build-up and some very confusing events lead up to this. I haven't seen anything of the newer Evangelion series, so lots of confusing stuff is happening in this entry. Doesn't make it bad though, just kind of learning as I go along. I can say that Alpha and Omega has the best Shinji I have ever read of, hands down. Just like the way you have handled things with big Shinji. Hope to see the next chapter.
Biblio388 chapter 5 . 8/20/2017
Someone just tripped a claymore and doesn't know it yet~. Can't help but look forward to the blast.
Biblio388 chapter 4 . 8/20/2017
I like the way you handled this one. A lot of stuff had to get done to set a groundwork and you worked out a way to do that. It was very interesting reading. Can't wait to see where you go next.
Biblio388 chapter 3 . 8/20/2017
Wow, talk about jumping on a tigers back. Can't say I am sad to see such a thing was necessary though, they don't know who they are f**king with.
Biblio388 chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
Nice opening. Covered most of the important stuff and still got to the good stuff as well.
W8W chapter 16 . 8/13/2017
Szkoda że Neema nie jest Ardat-Yakshi, ale zawsze mogła kłamać jak się bała o swoje życie. Było by śmiesznie gdyby się okazało że piloci evangelionów są odporni na ich efekt. Tylko pomyślcie jak by się rozeszło to wszystkie Ardat-Yakshi w galaktyce chciały by zacząć z nimi związek, wyobrażacie sobie reakcje Asuki na takie adoratorki :). Sądzę że po uporaniu się z Gendo to ludzie będą kolejnym wielkim złym. Są zbyt napaleni na evangeliony. Na początku nie rozumiałem czemu cytadela tak bała się evy prawda pole AT czyni je nietykalne dla broni konwencjonalnej ale o nim nie wiedzieli. Dopiero po przeczytaniu dotarło do mnie rozumieli (a przynajmniej zakładali) że evangelion może poruszać się o własnych siłach na planecie więc może wprowadzić działa i pancerze statków kosmicznych na takie pole walki bez utraty mobilności a to znacznie większy kaliber niż wszystko co mogą zrobić własną technologią. Wygląda na to że ROE Shinji wsiądzie ponownie za stery by ratować "brata". Relacje po powrocie na terre były przezabawne moje ulubione to reakcje asuki i Yui na dziewczynę Shinjiego. Czekam z niecierpliwością na następny rozdział.
Miles Tails McCloud chapter 16 . 8/5/2017
Just finished my 10th time reading this story. Hope chap 17 comes soon as I've been checking my email 3 times a day after your tweet about 6500 words into the next chapter. I hope Gendo gets curb stomped. I am interested to see how an A.T. Field holds up against a Reapers main cannon. (Shepard Entity vs Gendo)
becauseno chapter 16 . 7/18/2017
Please update this, dont leave us with an eternal cliffhanger please
shadow chapter 16 . 7/10/2017
I liked the chapter!
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