Reviews for Alpha and Omega Book 2: The Fallen
tokkafan4life chapter 16 . 7/29
General Patton's quote in the movie Patton was "…you magnificent bastard, I read your book. And I did, to be honest, several times throughout my life in my life, taking in more detail as my patience level grew with age.

And I gotta say, this really is your “War of The Worlds”. I say this because of the detail you left in in Chapter 16 of A&OThunder Child being sunk and humanity being mercilessly and hopelessly crushed by the aliens”, but rather it being “Aliens” it’s a reborn Gendo Ikari, and Shinji left in a hopeless situation, with everything to lose at this point.

Now maybe you weren’t trying to be that symbolic, and maybe I’m just a bit hyper-fixated on what is undoubtedly your “War of The Worlds”. Maybe you were hoping for that one review that can show the appreciation you deserve, or maybe you’re dead. All I gotta say in closing, is that I hope you’ll be doing okay enough to post the final chapter, or maybe, hopefully post one last epic featuring Jack, Ashley Williams, the finality of what is Young Shinji’s relationship with Neema, Rei, and Kaworu.

Hopefully you can contact me here or on AO3 underXannyPhantimbs”, my offer still stands on whether or not you want to be compensated for the upload of Gevurah. I would also love to chat about your attention to detail when writing youre chapters. I’m trying to write a Crossover-Fic and I’d love to have your assistance in writing.

Best regards,TokkaFan4Life.
Luke Forge chapter 1 . 7/3
Yeah what Tokkafan4life said lmao
tokkafan4life chapter 1 . 7/2
Do you take Zelle, CashApp,or PayPal?
I will quite literally pay your for the ending of this story.

If you aren’t dead, I’m willing to pay almost whatever order to see the conclusion of this Epic.
SoulOfCinders chapter 16 . 3/21
Well... disappointing, I mean the story is good but the fact that it's been EIGHT YEARS since it was updated is extremely disappointing
Wharpt chapter 16 . 8/17/2023
Ah,my. Another dead fiction. Such a damned shame.
MurderousLord chapter 16 . 8/12/2023
Just re-read this series again and saw that your twitter has went dark... so, thought it might be an idea to post something to see if you're not... Well, dead.
James Vivian chapter 16 . 3/31/2023
I’ve read through the series again. I absolutely love these fics, I hope you one day come back and finish them
Runyon chapter 8 . 9/5/2021
Still the best two Eva crossovers to date love this!
10Soah86 chapter 16 . 6/4/2021
With the recent release of both the Legendary Edition and 31 I've been getting back into both fandoms and came back to this fic. Still love it, fantastic plot and character dev. The first few chapters of this fic are so awesome. I don't know if you'll come back to this fic at some point, but I do hope it happens!
Weatherman21 chapter 16 . 3/29/2021
3 days. It took me three days to read through this series from end to end. I have read Book One in its entirety and I have read Book 2 up to its last updated point.
I loved every second of it.
I have enjoyed this series to no end, and I can honestly say it is one of my favorite Evangelion fanfictions of all time. I really love the chemistry between Shinji and Aria. I love the progress made by Misato and others. I...REALLY, really want to see the ending you had planned. I hate seeing a beloved fanfiction die. It feels so sad to see a series I’ve grown so fond of gathering dust without a resolution.
I hope you are well, and I wish you luck in all your future endeavors.
TerribleParable chapter 16 . 1/16/2021
I’m still here after 4 years. I really do miss you.
Guestinator chapter 8 . 10/20/2020
Everyone: Misato will never surrender

Shinji: Give her free rain, give her back her ship and oh yes don't kill her like every other named character except possibly his old man. Maybe. At this point if you have a name you can't die!
Guestinator chapter 6 . 10/20/2020
Aria has every reason to kill Ritsuko, hurting her and kills everyone around her... Then stops to let her live? Why?

NAMED CHARACTER POWER GOOOOOOO!
Guestinator chapter 3 . 10/20/2020
Note on the killings - Not one single person with a name. Long as they don't in anyway matter as even sideline NPCs you might talk to briefly outside of a battle then they are killed. If you have simply said thank you to him for opening a door before hand, and the author dare give you a name or nickname?

You won't ever die in this story.
Guestinator chapter 1 . 10/20/2020
Yo author who enjoys plotholes and making Shinji be a bitch n suffer, where ya be at? Hope your not dead but this type of AFK usually means death or prison.
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