That was beautiful
You have have a talent wth words
It was just wonderful!

This was a wonderful, wonderful story! I enjoyed it all! Thank you for your sharing it with us! ... Now to find your other story.

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love it-but where's priss? i think ive asked that every time ive read this i'll stop now

angst! melodramatic sinking to your knees in the rain! hot passionate kisses! shirbert! my 3rd time reading this! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

I know it has been some time since you wrote this, but I just read it and enjoyed it to no end. Only wish you would pick up the story with your idea for the future of these two lovers!

So... Where is Priscilla in all of this? Nevertheless, once again, a great chapter.

Oh my goodness that was intense! Poor Roy! Poor Anne. It is so hard. I was thinking that she shouldn't have told him about Gilbert. What good was going to come from it? But apparently she really felt she needed to. Oh man! What a rough situation. ... Okay, on to the next.

Another wonderful chapter!

Oh... Good ol' Philippa! And the exchange between Gil ad Anne was so awkward! And then it was sweet. Very well done.

Love this! Great writing.

This is a riveting tale! I can't wait to keep reading.

Thank you for writing this story. I think this was so much more satisfying than the original. At one point I actually forgot I wasn't reading the real thing.

Loved it!

This a lovely twist.