Reviews for Past and Present
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moleking chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Great story, it was sweet but I think you kept them in character
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
This was a wonderful short piece, and it gave us a welcome glimpse into Alanna's life after the books and into the relationship she shares with Coram. Well written, nicely paced, brilliantly conceived. I love it.
AlianneLovesLiam chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I really like this. I think it portrays Alanna and Coram's relationship well. (That sounded like an Englush teacher, but whatever). ;-) So sweet!
Purple Majestic chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
sweet!
The Escaped chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
This was the sweetest thing I've read in a while. Very well done.
The sword polishing was a nice touch, by the way.
ausland chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
This was lovely and sweet and very in character. Great job, and thanks to contributing to the fandom!
k chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
the world needs more of this. Alanna has never not had a father in life and this was just needed. thank you
BlueLion chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Nice oneshot - I especially like the picture you're drawing of Alanna's mother, here. Perhaps you could produce a multi-chapter-fic on the story of Lord Alan and Lady Marinie sometime in the future? The name "Marinie" seems rather uncommon though, where did that one come from?
sammyfish chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Nawwww. Just too sweet :)