Reviews for Mass Effect: The New Journey
Jubjub3000 chapter 3 . 9/12
Makes me wonder how far the elites have come in building their infrastructure up, I'm sure that after 100 years they would have the capabilities to build ships of a similar tonnage to their supercarriers. Shame they didn't start out with one as then they could claim to have lost their homeworld and are looking for a place to settle down.
GloGang214 chapter 11 . 9/9
lol i hope he finds out and executes her
Devilking1994 chapter 14 . 8/28
I doubt Khar'shan could hold the entire Batarian population they probably number 15 billion at a low placing them all on one world would be cruel to the extreme
Devilking1994 chapter 9 . 8/26
I don’t see why Hannah would keep his kid a secret from him I’m sure if she had asked him he would of kept his status as the father a secret for her

Personally she just comes across as a uncaring bitch that cares more for her career than her kid
DebaterMax chapter 5 . 8/14
According to him.

Shouldnt be it’s own sentence

We're dealing with complete unknowns and charging in like reckless idiots will only

get the vast majority of our fleets killed."

You accidentally made a new paragraph. Story is awesome btw
DebaterMax chapter 4 . 8/14
Hey 2 small typos

He hoped these TDST impressed him more they touched down

Maybe He hoped these TDST impressed him but with increasing hopes the more they let down

2ndly for Dor’n I swear you spelled was wa
snow in the darkness chapter 8 . 7/25
Sometimes I don't get the point of ONI or OAI, I know they are useful in some extent like Spartan 2 heck even spartan 3 with the moral kick out air lock, but seriously most of the time this organization is more problem than they worth, like what is the point of intelligent agency when you keep the intelligent for yourself, bunch of waste of paycheck
JollieHotDog chapter 2 . 6/23
F*cking trash don't read this shit
AvidGamer chapter 9 . 5/25
The sheer absurdity of the Systems Alliance being more advanced than post-war Halo humanity with Forerunner tech is so far beyond suspension of disbelief as to make this entire story an exercise in retardation and blatant Mass Effect wanking.
Ray SK chapter 20 . 3/21
No clue if reviews still matter but if they do id like to see you come back to this story
LightTrain chapter 2 . 3/14
I was liking this fic so far, but then you include your own Titanfall in it? You’ve easily earned a favorite from me
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/30
You know humanity should have destroyed the relays and expanded on there own it would have taken them thousands of years to run into the council and already have probably have tens of thousands of colonies at that point the UNSC had like 800 colonies in a tiny area of space it would have taken them thousands of years to run into the council if they had destroyed the relays they probably would be a tier 1 civilization and be like ancient humans could have made humans in this series older than the council races and have them spread out over 10,000 light years I mean there was a lot you could have done instead of making this trash humans in my opinion move to fast they think in the decade or centuries not in the millenniums
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 12 . 1/4
It makes sense that the Spartans would have difficulty with the super Turians. The way they are trained and enhanced are above the Spartans. They are trained mainly in VR and also are enhanced drastically with cybernetics. The HUNTERS are cyborgs, where the Spartans are just highly enhanced Humans. Unless the Spartans become cybernetically enhanced, they will be playing catchup.
Dark The Bunny chapter 15 . 11/21/2020
Is it just me, or does the Precursors look similar to the big bad Collector commander-dood in ME2's ending?
Guest chapter 2 . 11/16/2020
Fucking Useless
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