Reviews for Once In A Lifetime
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
I think I started crying
ThatOneGuy chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Yo, you should separate your paragraphs where there is dialogue, like in the first paragraph. John starts talking, that should be a new paragraph. other than that, it was pretty good.
BookOfMemes chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
SCREW YOU! HOLY FREAKING CRAP! SCREW-FREAKING-YOU! :)