Reviews for Underneath The Surface
Fierblaze chapter 67 . 5/3/2023
WHY would you give Kali a tail for no reason?
Fierblaze chapter 65 . 5/3/2023
you seriously just fucking skipped when Yang met Kali and Ghira?
Fierblaze chapter 44 . 5/2/2023
how can Weiss claim to withhold the right to the plan on using security interns? it's not a copyrightable idea
Fierblaze chapter 44 . 5/2/2023
why did you say ozpin has salt and pepper hair?
Fierblaze chapter 41 . 5/2/2023
why has Yang not talked to her dad about the videos?
Fierblaze chapter 40 . 5/2/2023
why would they hate being watched by their instructors? that's literally what ozpin did.
Fierblaze chapter 39 . 5/2/2023
why would they think they could steal taiyangs booze without repercussions?
I do like how you handled Raven and Tai, even if the video thing was a little forced
Fierblaze chapter 31 . 5/1/2023
why does aura not function as a shield in battle in this, when you keep mentioning it as a shield against the weather?
Fierblaze chapter 26 . 4/30/2023
I was kind of expecting more of Weiss realizing she was acting like her father again.
Fierblaze chapter 6 . 4/29/2023
why would Ruby and Weiss be scared of a mugger with a knife? between their semblances and aura, they could beat him no problem
Fierblaze chapter 6 . 4/29/2023
why wouldn't Weiss get them a hotel room?
Fierblaze chapter 2 . 4/29/2023
why wouldn't Yang just call or text blake?
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 3/4/2020
Honestly, seems kinda forced.

Why do they not have there weapons with them? I get they on a date but seriously, with the amount of shit they get into they really should expect this kinda shit.

It's pretty clear that most White Fang don't have Aura active, so Ruby should have little to no trouble with them even without her weapon. Forced drama is forced.
Darknight2124 chapter 76 . 12/7/2019
This story is amazing. Probably one of the best stories I've ever read in my life. I almost shied away from the story when whiterose separated but i couldn't leave without the closure I was looking for. I'm glad I didn't because I would've have missed the best part of the story. While I wish this wasn't the end because I simply wish I could see more. And can't bring it upon myself to say this wasnt the best ending that could have been written for this story. I hope to see more with the coming seasons of RWBY
Darknight2124 chapter 54 . 12/6/2019
I love this story and all but you just saved your butt with this chapter. I didn't think that the break up was gonna hit as hard as it did with the time stamp. But rest assured I have a renewed energy to finish the story again.
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