|Reviews for Sharpener and Erasa: 21 Truths|
| gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 4/10
J'aime bien continu.
| feedthegrimmjows chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
I really liked this fic. I think it's nice that you focused on such underused characters. This was so nicely written. Great work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
Me and Kaeton was laying down but she got
| Theappleguy chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
One of the best Sharpener and Erasa fanfic that I ever seen. Nice job.
| Books52 chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
They all sound so flawless
| Captured Moon chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
I really enjoyed your story on these two. It definitely shows a whole different side to them, but I really love it. Sharpner, the smart jock from a broken home; and Erasa, the manicured, yet not afraid to get her hands dirty, girl from a large family.
I liked how you added Videl to their story without it taking over. It's just like watching some back-story filler episodes.
Thank you for posting and I hope I get to see more of your work soon!
| euroteres chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
This really is something worth reading. It's simple, it's too the point and it gets what it wants to get done, done and it does it damn well.
| friendly advice chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
I like this story. You're a talented writer: )
| SierraLarson chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
I LOVED THIS! I LOVE SHARPNER AND ERASA SO MUCH SO IT'S REALLY GREAT TO SEE A FIC FOR THEM. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I LOVED EVERYTHING AND I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING MORE 'CAUSE I'M JUST SO HAPPY SOMEONE WROTE SOMETHING S/E
THANK YOU FOR THIS *heart symbol*
| TeeLee123 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
For your first dbz fanfic, it was done well. I enjoyed reading it. I think this story would fare better as a drabble series, meaning a new chapter for each truth. It's sort of a tactic some fanfic writers like to use ( me included), I've noticed. . .the story would get more exposure that way.
Gohan didn't say a lot, but when he did, it was awesome and meaningful to the story. It was great!