Reviews for A misterious Island!
gear25 chapter 2 . 10/27/2015
please update parakalo poly...
mysticblade7 chapter 3 . 5/9/2015
please update soon
mysticblade7 chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
wow! very good story. i just don't know if ;strike squad is there for rest or the island is a trap
Simone Robinson chapter 3 . 4/4/2014
Interesting start. :) I do not know the series very well, but this is a good beginning to the story that sets up interesting plot points. Well done.
Peace girl chapter 3 . 3/15/2014
Yes another update! Whooooo
Can you update again please? :3
Guest chapter 3 . 3/14/2014
Just some feedback:
There's too much talking and not enough describing...
That would help make the chapters a bit longer.
And makes sure to use really good descriptive words and to connect with the characters personality.
Your are doing really well.
ChasexJinjaforever chapter 3 . 3/8/2014
I love it! I am really inerested with this story and in my opinion every chapter that you both have written it's great! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Peace girl chapter 2 . 2/11/2014
Awesome! You should become a famous author!
Please CONTINUE!
Alyak98 chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
I love this story so far. :) It's really awesome!
ChasexJinjaforever chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
I love it! It was really good and can't wait to see what happens next. Update next chapter soon
Peace girl chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Naughty, naughty Dax he can't be drinking! Can he?
TacticianLyra chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
All I have to say is: please work on the grammar. Other than that, it looks promising. But seriously, grammar.
Lakota1172 chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Oh my oh my! I really like the sound of this one guys :3
ChasexJinjaforever chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
I really love the story! PLEASE update next chapter as soon as you can.