Great story, disappointing ending.

This cries out for a sequel but you left them in such a mess, I don't know where to start or where to go. I have other, easier ones on my list. Liked the story but the ending was really confusing. Did you really intend to stop there, or did life get in the way?

Nice story; still a disappointing ending.

This is a great story it would be nice if it was continued

Please continue i love this story its amazing

You leaving us hanging like this is not nice! Please finish it.

Hi fistfulsofwords
I just wanted to write a review to tell you how much I enjoy reading your story. I see that you haven't updated in a really long time, and I don't know why that is—whether something happened in your life or you just don't feel the inspiration for the story anymore. Whatever the reason, I wanted to tell you that I get it. However, I also wanted to say that you are a very talented writer, and tell you that you shouldn't let whatever's stopping you from writing prevent you from something you seem to enjoy.
Whenever you update the story, if you ever do, know that you have at least one person who is eagerly waiting, and is excited to read whatever's next. :) Thanks for putting up such a great story, and I hope you get back to it in the future.

From a Friendly Fan

you should finish it. this story is amazing, really.

It's such a shame you didn't finish this. You're a very good writer and this had a great story line.

Just found your story and I'm loving it! I hope you can post an update soon

I know you haven't updated in a while but please update soon just found this story and it's so good I'm already hooked hope you can update soon

When will there be an update

So good. Hope you have more coming. Did a good job on the personalities of Kensi and Deeks

Bellissima storia...a quando il prossimo capitolo?

I just discovered your story, and I am hooked! I know that RL can get busy, but I do hope that you update soon. Good luck with you busy work schedule and "adulting" as you call it! )