|Reviews for Soulbound|
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 13 . 4/21
I still find it interesting even now that you've broken from canon. I do agree the characters could have acted more realistically considering all the high emotions that were hinted at. And certain character could have played a larger role. I'm excited to see where this goes in the next few chapters especially with Blake/yang. Overall, the integration of the bonding and aura mechanics was well done up until this point and fit in with the lore quite well. But the drama around ruby's possible death and weiss saving her by bonding and sharing her aura, though the mechanics made sense, felt a little thrown in compared to previous uses of the concept. The dialogue and exposition seemed rushed especially blake's reaction and explanation. Maybe it's just me. Still interested in seeing more.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 12 . 4/21
I really like the examination of killing and what the scythe means. It's so simple but done very throughly and thoughtfully. It really explains ozpin's comment and why qrow chose to teach her in a meaningful and fitting way. It displays ruby's dreams and ideals well and why her's are the most selfless. This is especially highlight when oobleck questions the team members in the second volume. And wow, deviations and possible deaths. Let's see where this goes.
| Fredrick Bismarck chapter 9 . 4/20
It is in this chapter that I see the thematic depth that this series could have explored. I see the merit and pleasure in having such a novelization of the series to do just that. Your prose is quite moving especially the great use of oobleck as a means to have these discussions. You do well with the limited characterization and vague locations to create the subtle intricacies, backstories, and motivations. It doesn't replace it but supplements the series and brings the it into a form larger and more interesting. It makes you fall in love with the characters again. Wonderful work.
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/13
I really really dont like how you did Ruby's death". You make it clear that Ruby is beyond any shadow of a doubt dead,a corpse,departed. Yet Weiss through magic maguffin abilaties that are never mentioned nor even hinted at, Weiss resurrects Ruby. I wish that instead Rubt being straight up dead,she was merely very close to death. I alsi wish that you atleast gave a passing mention or some form of foreshadowing to the bond's healing abilaties,or whatever it is that actually took Rubt from 'corpse' to "clear to leave the hospital hours after she arrived"
Overall a good story, but you pushed mu suspension of belief a bit to far with the ending.
| Yuri-hime chapter 15 . 3/29
Its been...a very...*very*...long time since a fellow author's work has left me this...discombobulated with emotions...
I started this story at 6am...I finished it at 12am the following morning...I read this *entire* story in one day...I could not put it down...I *couldn't* stop reading it...every word, every sentence, every emotion evoked and wrung out of me...I *had* to see this story through to the very end. And now that I have, my heart feels...full...overflowing with such intense emotion, and all I can do is to humbly bow, and say a truly *deeply* heartfelt 'Thank You.'
I've been reading and writing fanfiction for *years* and it takes a very *very* special talent and author to evoke this level of emotion that I'm currently feeling. Thank you, again. This is one of those gem stories that I will more than likely carry with me for the rest of my life...every now and then thinking back to certain moments with laughter...with a smile...with emotional tears. This story was *that* powerful, and the many *many* issues/points/lessons it delved into and explored so fully and completely, made it an absolute marvel.
Once again 'Thank You' for writing and sharing this beyond wonderful and amazing story. It is truly a gift, and one that I'm sure will keep on giving to each and every person who will ever read it :)
| Yuri-hime chapter 9 . 3/27
*recovered enough to somewhat properly comment* This is your most stunning chapter yet. It's just...wow...
| Yuri-hime chapter 9 . 3/27
Wow...*too speechless at this chapter to really be able to say or think anything else*...
| Yuri-hime chapter 6 . 3/27
This story is just still so stunningly amazing. Love :)
| Yuri-hime chapter 1 . 3/27
There are no words to properly describe how stunningly amazing this story is.
| akinkymidgit chapter 15 . 3/25
Amazing story, I writing, good plot, really captured the characters and I really enjoyed this one, Thank you for your amazing story, it was definitely worth blowing off homework for!
| LeadAntagonist chapter 1 . 2/2
Oh my god, he died.
| Lunaryon Lord of Chaos chapter 16 . 2/2
I hate to be the one to say this...
But I just checked the RoosterTeeth site...
Monty has passed away.
| God Emperor of Chaos chapter 16 . 1/31
The fact that they broke their goal of 50k in three hours shows how much the fanbase cares.
| sarista wow chapter 16 . 1/31
I'd heard of what happened earlier today and gave some money, all my best wishes are with Monty and his family. Thanks for setting up links and informing people here as well, as there are plenty of fans, like my self, who don't frequently check the website.
| Craxuan chapter 16 . 1/30
The donation has been made the moment I discover this news. I wish my best for Monty, and hope that he'll pull through safely back to us.