Reviews for My Dib
spongygirl19 chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
That was nice :) but, you have a few grammar mistakes. "When did all this started" would sound better if it was something like "So, when did all of this start?" because started is past tense.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
*wipes tear from eye*
That... That was beautiful
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
So adorable.
Plague Mellon Collie chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
I'm dying. You're on my favourite list now. Bravo.
RandomSpaceCactus chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
You did Zims personality very well in this, loved it! :3
Isla-Robin-295 chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
cupidity11 chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
It has really cute and good ideas in it. I loved how Dib was always in the way and the fact that he was always asking questions and using Zim to his own advantage for things like buying the milk. There were a few grammar and word errors. Your past tenses got mixed up. Like, 'I'd clung' when a better way of phrasing it would be 'I used to cling' but, it didn't really detract from your story so meh. Also, the dialogue felt a bit OOC sometimes. But, other than that, it's cute and I look forward to reading more from you. You'll only grow more as a writer! :D
Golden Tiger Eyes chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
That was cute :)