Reviews for The Road to be a Pokemon Master: Kanto Arc
Seth chapter 53 . 9/21
Great job! I know I'm late but I think it would have been hilarious if Serena ran over and mother cubone and then caught it in the pokeball! But great job never the less
Guest chapter 49 . 9/21
YASSSSS! Bro! YAS!
Seth chapter 1 . 9/17
Good job dude, I know you completed it and I'm just now reading it but excellent job!
TigerWarrior1998 chapter 62 . 9/15
Well, I've finally completed this story. To summarize what I think, THIS IS THE BEST POKEMON FANFICTION I'VE READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE. You have ash some amazing character development, along with Serena, Gary and the others as well. Their personalities fit each of them, they don't feel ooc. You gave ash pokemon that fit him perfectly, some strong and good ones at that, and also fixed problems that the anime had, making it even better than the original. Finally you added characters that the show didn't have, combining the show, games, manga, and origins. I'm astounded, I don't think I can find another pokemon fic as good as yours (besides the sequels). I have found other pokemon fics I like almost as much, maybe equally, but I am amazed. There are nitpick of course, no fic is perfect after all. I have noticed a few grammar errors here and there, but nothing to complain about. Also, don't get me wrong, I love the shipping between ash and serena, but towards the end it felt cheesy. Plus it feels that if they were separated, they wouldn't last long; they need to show that can't always rely on each other, sometimes you have to do things yourself, but that's just me. There's more but I could go on and on, and I don't think you'd like that. But again, they're nitpick, they don't ruin the story, but I feel they could've been better. But Hey, this was also your first fic, now look at you. Fanatic, thank you so much for writing this series.
God of the Challenge chapter 17 . 9/14
Final Story? Do tell.
God of the Challenge chapter 6 . 9/13
I know this sounds silly, but if you don't want to do the anime Unova and Kalos, why not the games?
Guest chapter 40 . 9/11
I really wanted to thank you cause of that nice story so far! But I wanted to say that I had to cry when I read that chapter (and I am a boy). But it wasn't like crying because I enjoyed that no it was line crying because I can't handle the stupidness of Ash. But the rest is very nice! And sorry for my bad English xD. creeedi
gillafrog chapter 32 . 9/5
how the hell did staryu and starmie eat their cake ._.
goddragonking chapter 54 . 8/29
is the egg a Larvitar or Axew
awsiddiquis chapter 39 . 8/27
Serena is the child of viridian? I mean, yellow said that she would train her, she has to be
Guest chapter 2 . 8/26
I thought Ash was insanely out of character at first but this is actually really consistent with the flashback XY Ash, so good job.
Evilpresident chapter 27 . 8/24
I'd feel a lot better if Damian was kicked in the gut afterwards
Evilpresident chapter 20 . 8/23
You made the goodbye much more heart breaking than in the anime
EnderCreeper11 chapter 14 . 8/19
#DomeOverHelix
EnderCreeper11 chapter 13 . 8/18
Spread the Word #DomeOVerHelix
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