Reviews for The Road to be a Pokemon Master: Kanto Arc |
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![]() ![]() ![]() why did serena open up in seconds to someobe she didnt even know for a day? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant not think of ash and serena as their childhood summer meeting looks instead if regular ash and sonewhat youbger looking kalos serena |
![]() ![]() ![]() Waterflower is crazy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Happy birthday, man. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, do you know banshee531? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Slutterfree doesn't deserve Ash's Butterfree Chad. If she couldn't accept him when he was himself and cringe she doesn't deserve him when he's based. |
![]() ![]() Man How Is This A Smart,Mature Ash Fanfiction All I See Is A Lame Idiot Like The Anime I could Not Even Go Pass Chapter 4...From Chapter 1 To 4 You Can Already Tell How Much It Will Be Difficult To Read Nothing Much From Original Ash |
![]() ![]() so awesome! |
![]() ![]() this is amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() All hail Serena Gabena, Prophetess of Lord Helix! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know what’s? Didn’t she say underwear? You realise how weird that sounds if I hadn’t known what she meant right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was never a fan of amourshipping, but there is no other way |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pontless read. Pintless garbage. Never start stories on this garbage vomit ass site if you have OCD and can't stop. Holy fuck EVERYTHING that can possibly be wrong with a "remake" story is wrong with this one. Every. Single. Thing. It would take days... no it would take a YEAR to write everything that is wrong with this heap of diseased shit. Just trust me and do not even start reading, it starts off decent for the first 3-5 chapters but goes incredibly hard and fast downhill and from that spiraling into one nonsense plot after another born out of Ash and everyone around him not being able to actually USE pokemon for ANYTHING other than fighting. The ammount of "someone fell cos Ash does not know he has Pidgeot and Bulbasaur whom he NEVER rotates out." is STAGGERING. This is writing at it's absolute worst, when the grammar, initial concept and beggining are good but everything else is terribly horribly WRONG and TROPEY to a disgusting degree. People, trope sites are not so you can use tropes, but avoid them, you braindead fucking retards lacking an iota of imagination or logical reasoning. |