Reviews for Ultimate Fairy: Volume I |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Would spinning him in the air with Gravattack really work since it isn’t a mode of transportation? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god an author who actually does research this fanfic is really good so far and i can imagine it’ll only get better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES, finally a story that captures ben heroic nature properly big up to the author bro this is already an amazing start to the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() 18 year old ben? I hope he has the completed omnitrix and not the flawed ultimatrix that was easily hacked into, but i don’t think that’s going to be the case given the title of the story, but you can’t really blame me guessing that since ben is only 15 in alien force and then 16 at the end of ultimate alien then in omniverse he’s 16 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, at least I can come back here and remeber this story WAS good under Ultimate10. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so sad that you chose to adopt this out, because no offense, but PyroHelixDrago is just not doing it justice. His plot beats seem to be all over the place, and it is clear that he only has rudimentary skills in writing and grammar. It's to the point where the characters are so OOC that they are almost caricatures of themselves. He also completely backtracked on character development to the point where the Fairy Tail cast are basically secondary-background characters in comparison to Ben 10 and Generator Rex characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will there be more |
![]() ![]() ![]() While there be more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story, character, writing, just the whole thing really, and I was excited to see more of it, especially the time skip and tournament with Ben involved, sadly I had to drop the story after this volume. The new author just isn't writing the same of anything, it's all different and in a very bad way, I read a few chapters and tried to power on, and that was the problem, with this volume I even stayed up late to read more, with volume 2 I had to force myself and take breaks, it took me an entire day just to read two chapters from how many breaks I had to take. Not sure if you'll pick up where you left off or take back the story, but this was a great story nonetheless and its quite bad that it's changed for the worse, and many reviews of volume 2 prove that to me. |
![]() ![]() There were many alien ben could use to deafet those worm like upgrade ghost freak gravttack but the story ir nice |
![]() ![]() Hey ult.10, don't know if you're gonna read this, but pyrohelixdrago is taking away the essence and integrity of the fanfic, i know you pass the project to him, but the formula he is using isn't compatible with the fanfic, i am concient that there isn't much that you can do, do to the fact that you aren't in the project's wheel anymore, but i belive that as the one who pass it, it is in the best interest of the fanfic that its stay loyal to the essence and integrity, just talk to him please, for the sake of this fanfic that many like to read |
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